Reading— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition and filler words, and use correct word forms (e.g., 'autobiographies', 'biographies', 'stories'). Add one or two specific examples of books or authors to make the answer more concrete. Keep to 2–3 sentences maximum.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy reading. I often read novels and biographies, such as Gabriel García Márquez and Michelle Obama’s memoir, because they help me learn about different perspectives and improve my knowledge in areas like history and personal development.

Gợi ý: Organize the answer: give a clear preference, state 2 distinct reasons using linking words, and avoid repetition. Correct grammar (e.g., 'on paper', 'it affects my eyesight', 'I can highlight important passages'). Limit to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer reading on paper because it is easier on my eyes and reduces screen fatigue. Also, I can easily annotate and highlight important passages, which helps me study and remember information better.

Gợi ý: Answer directly with a topic sentence, then contrast two situations using linking words (e.g., 'when' and 'but'). Use correct vocabulary ('irrelevant', 'scan' not 'scamming') and avoid hesitations. Give a brief example of what counts as important information.

Ví dụ: I read carefully when the text contains important facts or instructions, such as study material or technical details. But when the content is irrelevant or consists of long examples, I usually scan it quickly to find the main points.

Gợi ý: Provide a concise preference sentence, then give 1–2 specific reasons with clear linking words. Use natural vocabulary ('detailed reading', 'relevant', 'well-being') and avoid repeating phrases. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer detailed reading because it helps me understand complex topics and retain important information. If an article is relevant to my studies or health, I read it carefully to learn facts and form my own opinions.

× Yes, I do like reading and I often read a lot of books like a stories, novels, autobiography, biographies, etcetera because it enhances my knowledge related to any specific field like educational, health etcetera.

✓ Yes, I do like reading and I often read a lot of books, such as stories, novels, autobiographies, and biographies, because they enhance my knowledge in specific fields like education and health.

Article and noun number errors: 'a stories' is incorrect because 'stories' is plural and does not take 'a'. Use 'such as' to introduce examples. 'autobiography, biographies' should be parallel and pluralized: 'autobiographies and biographies'. Use plural verb 'they enhance' to agree with plural subject 'books'. Use correct nouns 'education' and 'health' instead of adjectives. Suggestion: remove incorrect 'a' before plural nouns, make lists parallel, and match verb number to subject.

× So yes, definitely I do like to read a lot of books.

✓ So yes, I definitely like to read a lot of books.

Redundant auxiliary and slight word order: 'do like' is acceptable for emphasis but here 'definitely' fits better after subject: 'I definitely like'. Suggestion: use 'I definitely like' for natural phrasing.

× Well, I prefer to read on the paper because I think it also protects my eyesight because on the screen I think I can affect my eyesight because it gave a negative impact on my health also.

✓ Well, I prefer to read on paper because I think it protects my eyesight; reading on a screen can harm my eyes and negatively affect my health.

Preposition and verb form errors: use 'on paper' not 'on the paper'. 'Can affect my eyesight' should be 'can harm my eyes' or 'can affect my eyesight' but avoid switching tense to 'gave'. 'Gave a negative impact' is incorrect; use 'has a negative impact' or 'negatively affect'. Suggestion: use consistent present tense when stating general beliefs and correct prepositions ('on paper').

× So I prefer to read on the paper based because we can.

✓ So I prefer to read on paper because I can.

Article and phrase errors: 'on the paper based' is ungrammatical. Use 'on paper' and adjust pronoun to match singular speaker: 'I can' rather than 'we can' if referring to personal ability. If meaning general habit, use 'people can' or 'we can' but keep sentence coherent. Suggestion: decide whether speaking personally or generally and use appropriate pronoun and article.

× I can mark the highlight the things, important things and mark the important pages.

✓ I can highlight important things and mark important pages.

Awkward repetition and incorrect word order: 'mark the highlight the things' is redundant and ungrammatical. Simplify by using verbs once: 'highlight' and 'mark', and place 'important' before the noun. Suggestion: avoid repeating verbs and keep adjective before noun.

× So definitely I would like to prefer.

✓ So definitely I would prefer that.

Incorrect verb combination and missing object: 'would like to prefer' is redundant. Use either 'I would like' or 'I prefer'. Here 'I would prefer that' or simply 'I prefer that' is correct. Suggestion: choose one modal structure and provide an object or clause.

× Well, there is some something important information is given in the book, then definitely I read it too carefully and if I have a irrelevant information in the book like there are so many examples are given and then I I would prefer to give a scamming rather than to read carefully.

✓ If there is some important information in a book, I definitely read it carefully, but if the information is irrelevant or there are many examples, I prefer to scan rather than read carefully.

Redundant and incorrect structures: 'there is some something' should be 'there is some' or 'something'. 'Important information' is uncountable, so no 'a'. 'a irrelevant information' is wrong: use 'irrelevant information' (no article). 'Give a scamming' is incorrect phrasing; correct term is 'scan'. Also tense and word order corrected for clarity. Suggestion: use 'there is' + uncountable noun without 'a', use 'scan' for quick reading, and avoid redundant words.

× Well, I think I prefer to have a detailed reading because when I have to read something, I want to gain a lot of knowledge from that content.

✓ Well, I think I prefer detailed reading because when I read something, I want to gain a lot of knowledge from the content.

Article and verb tense: 'a detailed reading' is possible but 'detailed reading' is more natural. 'When I have to read something' can be simplified to 'when I read something'. Suggestion: prefer concise phrases and consistent present tense for habitual actions.

× And if it's so much relevant to me, definitely I would read it as so much in a detail because it enhances my knowledge in any field either if I'm talking about the health, political and my well beingness.

✓ If it is highly relevant to me, I would certainly read it in detail because it enhances my knowledge in any field, whether health, politics, or my well-being.

Incorrect adverb/adjective choice and word forms: 'so much relevant' should be 'highly relevant' or 'very relevant'. 'Read it as so much in a detail' is ungrammatical; use 'read it in detail'. 'Either if I'm talking about the health, political and my well beingness' has wrong articles and forms: use 'whether' and nouns 'health, politics, or my well-being'. Suggestion: use proper adverbs ('highly', 'certainly'), correct collocations ('in detail'), and standard noun forms ('politics', 'well-being').