Reading— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cải thiện sự trôi chảy và ngữ pháp: tránh lặp từ (ví dụ: “I I”), sửa cấu trúc câu để đúng ngữ pháp (ví dụ: “because I am very busy” thay cho “because of myself very busy”), và chia ý thành câu ngắn gọn hơn. Thêm một câu hỗ trợ cụ thể ngắn gọn (ví dụ: tên một cuốn sách) để làm câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy reading. I used to read many social psychology books because I wanted to understand how people think and behave; for example, I read 'Influence' by Robert Cialdini. Recently I have less time because I am very busy with work, so I read less than before.

Gợi ý: Giảm tiếng ừm/ứ và sửa ngữ pháp để câu mạch lạc: loại bỏ tiếng ngắt quãng (um/uh), sửa cụm từ không chính xác như “the sense of new paper help me more enjoyable” thành “the smell and texture of paper make reading more enjoyable”. Thêm một câu ngắn nêu ưu nhược điểm của cả hai để cân bằng trả lời.

Ví dụ: I prefer reading on paper because I love the traditional experience; the smell and texture of the pages and the feeling of flipping through them make reading more enjoyable. However, I sometimes read on a screen when I need convenience or portability.

Gợi ý: Loại bỏ lặp từ và dùng liên từ để kết nối ý rõ ràng: tránh lặp (when when when), sửa thì động từ (“it comes” chứ không phải “it come”), và dùng liên từ như “however” hoặc “whereas” để thể hiện đối lập giữa skim và careful reading. Thêm ví dụ cụ thể hơn về tình huống cần đọc kỹ (ví dụ: báo cáo học thuật hoặc hợp đồng).

Ví dụ: I usually skim the first page to get the main idea quickly; for instance, when I read an article for an overview I only look at headings and the first sentences. However, when I encounter a complicated section—such as an academic report or a contract—I read carefully to understand the details.

Gợi ý: Cải thiện tính mạch lạc và chính xác ngữ pháp: tránh lặp từ (to to to to), sửa cách viết số thứ tự (“first sentence”), và cấu trúc câu để mạch lạc. Bổ sung lý do cụ thể tại sao bạn chuyển sang scanning (ví dụ: khối lượng công việc, tốc độ xử lý thông tin) để câu trả lời đầy đủ và tự nhiên hơn.

Ví dụ: I used to read in detail to fully understand information, but recently I prefer scanning because I have less time and need to process information quickly. For example, when I check emails or new articles I scan the headings and the first sentence to identify what is important.

× Yes I do, I used to read a lot of social psychology books because I I want to understand how people think and behave.

✓ Yes, I do. I used to read a lot of social psychology books because I wanted to understand how people think and behave.

The student mixes present and past tense incorrectly: 'used to' indicates a past habitual action, so the reason clause should use past tense 'wanted' for consistency. Also remove the repeated 'I' and add appropriate punctuation. Suggestion: maintain consistent tense within connected clauses; here use past tense after 'used to'.

× But recently I don't have much time because of myself very busy so I read less than before.

✓ But recently I haven't had much time because I've been very busy, so I read less than before.

The original is ungrammatical: 'because of myself very busy' is incorrect structure. Use present perfect ('haven't had') to indicate continuing recent situation and present perfect continuous ('I've been very busy') to explain reason. Also add commas for clarity. Suggestion: use correct verb phrases and appropriate perfect tenses for recent ongoing states.

× I prefer to read on paper because, uh, I love the traditional reading experience.

✓ I prefer to read on paper because, uh, I love the traditional reading experience.

No grammar correction required for tense or structure here; sentence is acceptable. Keep article 'the' as used. (Included for completeness.)

× Uh, the feeling of flipping through the pages and the sense of new paper help me, uh, more enjoyable.

✓ Uh, the feeling of flipping through the pages and the smell of new paper make reading more enjoyable for me.

Problems: 'sense of new paper' is unnatural; 'help me, more enjoyable' incorrectly mixes verb and adjective. Use plural verb 'make' to match compound subject and 'more enjoyable' as complement with 'for me'. Also 'smell of new paper' is more natural than 'sense'. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement and use appropriate nouns and structures for describing experiences.

× At first I usually skim the first page to get the main idea quickly.

✓ At first I usually skim the first page to get the main idea quickly.

Sentence is grammatically correct; present simple 'usually skim' appropriately describes habitual action. (Included for completeness.)

× For example, when I read an article for an overview, I only look at headings and 1st sentence.

✓ For example, when I read an article for an overview, I only look at the headings and the first sentence.

Articles are missing before 'headings' and 'first sentence'. Use 'the' to refer to specific parts of the article and write out 'first' instead of '1st' in formal speech. Suggestion: include definite articles when referring to specific elements and avoid numerals in spoken sentences.

× But when when when it come to the complicated part, I read carefully to understand the detail.

✓ But when it comes to the complicated parts, I read carefully to understand the details.

Errors: repeated 'when' removed; subject-verb agreement 'it comes' (third person singular) needed; use plural 'parts' and 'details' to match general meaning. Suggestion: ensure correct verb form for third person and match singular/plural nouns to intended meaning.

× I used to read in detail to understand all the information, but now I don't have much time so I prefer scanning to get the main idea quickly.

✓ I used to read in detail to understand all the information, but now I don't have much time, so I prefer scanning to get the main idea quickly.

Sentence is mostly correct; only punctuation needed (comma before 'so'). Tenses are consistent: 'used to' (past habit) contrasted with present preference. Suggestion: add comma for clarity between clauses.

× For example, when I check e-mail or new articles, I usually scan heading and 1st sentence to, to to to know what is important.

✓ For example, when I check e-mail or new articles, I usually scan the headings and the first sentence to find out what is important.

Missing articles before 'headings' and 'first sentence'; repetitive filler 'to, to to to' removed; use 'find out' for clarity. Also pluralize 'headings' to match general scanning. Suggestion: avoid filler repetitions and include definite articles when referring to specific parts; use clear verbs like 'find out'.