Hobby— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more grammatical and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence stating your main hobbies, use correct verb forms, and limit to about 2–4 supporting clauses. Use linking words to connect ideas (for example, 'also' or 'in the evenings'). Give one short detail about frequency or why you enjoy each hobby.

Ví dụ: I have a few hobbies. I enjoy listening to music and playing video games, and in the evenings I often play basketball with my friends. I play basketball two or three times a week because it helps me relax and stay fit.

Gợi ý: Use consistent past tenses and avoid repetition. Give a clear topic sentence about childhood hobbies, then add one or two specific details (where, how often, or why you liked it). Use linking words like 'for example' or 'often'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had several hobbies as a child. For example, I often played games with my friends and we usually went to the park to play badminton in the evenings. I liked badminton because it was fun and kept me active.

Gợi ý: Be specific about which hobby you mean and use correct present perfect/simple tenses when talking about continuing hobbies. Avoid vague words like 'sometime' and correct phrasing like 'it feels refreshing.' Limit to one main hobby and add a reason or frequency.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have kept playing sports since childhood. I regularly go to the park in the evenings to play basketball or badminton with friends, and I find it refreshing and a great way to stay healthy.

Gợi ý: Clarify the meaning and correct grammar. Start with a direct answer (Yes/No), then explain specifics: which hobbies you share, what you do together, and how often. Use linking words like 'for example' and correct phrases such as 'we have picnics' or 'we eat food'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I share some hobbies with my family. For example, we often go out on weekends and sometimes have picnics in the park, where we eat, relax and enjoy time together.

× Yes, I have some hobbies like I have to listen to the music, playing games and in the evening I played basketball with my friends I enjoy a lot.

✓ Yes, I have some hobbies like listening to music, playing games, and in the evening I play basketball with my friends; I enjoy it a lot.

The sentence uses incorrect verb forms and inconsistent tenses. 'I have to listen to the music' incorrectly uses 'have to' (modal obligation) instead of the gerund 'listening' to list hobbies. 'playing games' is correct as a gerund but should be parallel with 'listening'. 'I played basketball' shifts to past tense; the context is habitual present, so use 'I play basketball'. Also add punctuation and 'it' after 'enjoy' for clarity. Suggestion: use parallel gerund forms for listing hobbies and keep present simple for habitual actions. Grammar problem type ID: 8

× Yes, when I was a child, I have a lot of hobbies like playing game with my friends.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I had a lot of hobbies like playing games with my friends.

The time reference is past ('when I was a child') so the verb should be past tense. 'I have' is present tense; change to 'I had'. Also 'playing game' needs plural 'games' for natural phrasing. Suggestion: match verb tense to the time reference and use plural for countable noun. Grammar problem type ID: 5

× I like to play badminton in the evening time.

✓ I liked to play badminton in the evening.

The sentence refers to childhood context, so past tense 'liked' is appropriate. 'Evening time' is wordy; 'in the evening' is more natural. Suggestion: choose concise time expressions and match tense to context. Grammar problem type ID: 13

× I went to the park and played badminton game in the park.

✓ I went to the park and played badminton there.

Repeating 'park' is redundant. 'Badminton game' is unnatural; simply 'played badminton' is idiomatic. The verbs 'went' and 'played' are correctly past tense; improve concision and style. Suggestion: avoid repetition and use idiomatic noun phrases. Grammar problem type ID: 5

× Yes, I had a hobby since my childhood.

✓ Yes, I have had a hobby since my childhood.

The phrase 'since my childhood' requires a present perfect tense to indicate an action or state that began in the past and continues to the present: 'have had'. Using simple past 'had' suggests it no longer applies. Suggestion: use present perfect for actions starting in the past and continuing now. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× In the evening time I play a lot in the park with my friends, like basketball sometime, sometime badminton.

✓ In the evening I play a lot in the park with my friends, sometimes basketball, sometimes badminton.

'In the evening time' is wordy; 'in the evening' is natural. 'Sometime' is incorrect here; the adverb 'sometimes' (meaning occasionally) is needed. Also punctuation and word order improved for clarity. Suggestion: use 'sometimes' and separate activities with commas. Grammar problem type ID: 20

× I like to play it and it's feel made fresh.

✓ I like to play it because it makes me feel refreshed.

'It's feel made fresh' is ungrammatical. Use 'it makes me feel refreshed' or 'it makes me feel fresh'. 'Makes' is present simple third-person singular. 'Refreshed' is the correct adjective. Suggestion: use correct subject-verb agreement and choose appropriate adjective form. Grammar problem type ID: 13

× Yes I am the same hobbies I love him as my family member.

✓ Yes, I have the same hobbies as my family members; I love them.

'I am the same hobbies' is incorrect—use 'I have the same hobbies'. 'I love him as my family member' misuses pronouns and unclear reference; if referring to family members generally, use 'them'. Also 'family member' vs plural depends on meaning; 'family members' fits context. Suggestion: use correct verb 'have' for possession and match pronoun number to referent. Grammar problem type ID: 12

× My family member like to go outside on the weekend and I also go with my parents on the weekend and we enjoy and we sometime be the food and enjoy a picnic over there.

✓ My family members like to go out on the weekend, and I also go with my parents; we enjoy ourselves, sometimes eating food and having a picnic there.

Multiple issues: 'family member' should be plural 'family members'. 'Like' must agree with plural subject (like -> like is correct for plural). 'Go outside' is better as 'go out'. 'We enjoy and we sometime be the food' is ungrammatical—use 'we enjoy ourselves' and 'sometimes eating food'. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes'. 'Enjoy a picnic over there' -> 'have a picnic there'. Suggestion: use plural nouns when appropriate, correct adverb 'sometimes', proper verbs ('enjoy ourselves', 'have a picnic') and natural prepositions ('there'). Grammar problem type ID: 12