Hobby— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make the answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail using a linking word. Correct grammar (articles, verb forms) and avoid repetition. Aim for 2–3 sentences, for example: state the hobby, say since when, and mention a concrete practice routine.

Ví dụ: I enjoy making music; I have composed melodies since childhood. For example, I write a new short melody every day and spend about an hour practicing instruments to improve my composition skills.

Gợi ý: Clarify timeline and meaning. Begin with a clear statement about childhood hobby, then use linking words (because/so) to explain reasons and give a specific example of past routine. Fix ambiguous phrases like 'hard distance' and simplify tense usage.

Ví dụ: Yes. When I was a child I loved music and dreamed of becoming a composer. Because of that, I practiced every day—sometimes for an hour or more—so I could improve my skills for the future.

Gợi ý: Make the response grammatically correct and more natural. Give a concise statement that the hobby has continued since childhood, then add one specific reason or example why it remains important, using linking words like 'and' or 'because'. Avoid informal or incorrect phrases such as 'never be gonna'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have had the same hobby since childhood: music. It has stayed with me because composing calms me and allows me to express my emotions, so I still write melodies whenever I feel inspired.

Gợi ý: Be more specific and organize the answer: start with a clear yes/no, then explain how family members share the hobby and give one concrete example of a family activity. Use linking words like 'for example' and correct phrasing ('they enjoy singing' not 'prefer to sing a song').

Ví dụ: Yes, many members of my family enjoy music too. For example, my sister likes singing while my brother focuses on composing guitar melodies, and we often share tips or learn new techniques together.

× Yeah, to be honest, I have a hobby called music and from childhood my hobby is an to create a melody.

✓ Yeah, to be honest, I have a hobby: music, and since childhood my hobby has been creating melodies.

The original uses the infinitive 'to create' where a gerund (-ing form) is required after 'hobby' and 'has been'. Use 'creating' to express an ongoing activity or habit. Also adjust articles and word order for natural English.

× And that's why I also practice in to create a new melody each and every day.

✓ And that's why I also practice creating a new melody every day.

After 'practice' use the gerund 'creating' rather than the infinitive 'to create'. Remove 'in' which is unnecessary and 'each and every day' can be simplified to 'every day' for natural phrasing.

× Yeah, actually I have a hard distance when I was a child and a hobby called the music and present time it also I should prefer the music because it's my dream too.

✓ Yeah, actually I had a difficult childhood and a hobby called music, and I still prefer music now because it's my dream too.

The sentence mixes present and past incorrectly. Use past tense 'had' for 'when I was a child' and present 'still prefer' for current preference. 'Hard distance' is incorrect; 'difficult childhood' is the intended meaning. Reorder clauses for clarity.

× Or I was practicing day by day, or I would practice each and every hour at the daytime for future better.

✓ I practiced day by day, and I would practice every hour during the day to improve for the future.

Use simple past 'practiced' to describe habitual past actions. 'Each and every hour at the daytime' is awkward; use 'every hour during the day'. 'For future better' should be 'to improve for the future' to show purpose.

× Yeah, I have a hobby. You and I was a child. My hobby is music.

✓ Yes, I have a hobby. When I was a child, my hobby was music.

The original mixes pronouns and tenses. 'You and I was a child' is ungrammatical; the intended meaning is 'when I was a child'. Use past tense 'was' for childhood period and keep statements clear and separate.

× It cannot be changed by the time.

✓ It has not changed over time.

Use present perfect 'has not changed' to indicate a state that started in the past and continues to the present. 'Cannot be changed by the time' is incorrect and unnatural.

× It's always the same when I was a child or when I was angry or when I was an older.

✓ It was the same when I was a child, when I was angry, and when I got older.

Maintain past tense consistency for past situations ('was'). 'When I was an older' is incorrect; use 'when I got older'. Also list parallel clauses correctly.

× It's never be gonna change.

✓ It's never going to change.

Combine correct future construction: 'going to' with the base verb 'change'. 'Never be gonna change' mixes 'be' and colloquial 'gonna' incorrectly. Use 'It's never going to change' or 'It will never change'.

× Yeah, to be honest, my family members have also the same hobbies like me, they also prefer to sing a song or learn something new about the melody, or how to create a melody on guitar, or how to create a melody on track.

✓ Yes, to be honest, my family members have the same hobbies as me: they also like singing or learning new things about melody, such as how to create a melody on the guitar or how to compose a melody on a track.

Use 'the same hobbies as me' (correct preposition and article usage). 'Sing a song' is more natural as 'singing'. 'On guitar' requires the article 'the guitar'. 'Create a melody on track' should be 'compose a melody on a track' for clarity. Rephrase for natural collocation and correct articles.