Hobby— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be direct and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, correct small mistakes (e.g. "leisure time" not "laser time"), avoid contradictions ("many hobbies" then "that's the only hobby"). Add one specific detail and use a linking word. Also limit to 2–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: I enjoy several activities, but football is my favourite hobby. I usually play football with my friends during my leisure time twice a week, which helps me stay fit and relax.

Gợi ý: Use correct tense and avoid repetition and fillers. Begin with a clear topic sentence in past tense, then give one or two specific examples or a brief reason using a linking word. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had several hobbies as a child, such as painting and playing cricket. In particular, I loved painting because it allowed me to be creative, and I often spent an hour after school drawing or colouring.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and avoid repeating the same idea. Use a topic sentence stating whether a childhood hobby continues, then briefly explain why with a specific detail and a linking word. Reduce hesitation and redundancy.

Ví dụ: Not really — my hobbies have changed with age, although I still enjoy some sports. For example, I used to paint as a child, but now I focus mainly on playing football several times a week because it fits my social life and schedule.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear answer (yes/no) and give a concise reason. Avoid unnecessary hesitations and ensure grammar agreement (e.g. "they are usually busy with their work"). Provide one specific example and use a linking word to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: No, I don't really share the same hobbies as my family. They are usually busy with work — my father works as a farmer and my mother manages the household — so they have little free time for leisure activities.

× Yeah, I have many hobbies but playing football I like the most, so I usually play during my laser time with my friends and so that's the only hobby I have.

✓ Yeah, I have many hobbies, but I like playing football the most, so I usually play during my leisure time with my friends, and that's my main hobby.

Incorrect word choice 'laser' should be 'leisure'. Word order was awkward: 'playing football I like the most' should be 'I like playing football the most'. Combine clauses with commas and 'and' for clarity. Use present simple 'I usually play' and 'that's my main hobby' to match context. (Grammar problem type ID: 6)

× During my childhood days, I have many hobbies like painting, playing cricket, football, basketball, but uh, painting is, is one of the most favorite activity that I would love to do during my laser time, uh, during my childhood days.

✓ During my childhood, I had many hobbies like painting, cricket, football, and basketball, but painting was one of my favorite activities that I loved to do in my leisure time.

When referring to past period 'during my childhood', use past tense 'had', 'was', 'loved'. Correct article and noun agreement: 'one of the most favorite activity' should be 'one of my favorite activities'. Replace 'laser' with 'leisure'. Remove repetition and filler words for clarity. (Grammar problem type ID: 5)

× Right now I don't think so because hobbies change according to age so now I don't think so. I have the similar hobbies as compared to my childhood days. So as I already told you and right now I'm only having a hobby of playing football. So that's the thing.

✓ Right now I don't think so because hobbies change as you get older, so I don't think I have the same ones. I have similar hobbies compared to my childhood, but at the moment my only hobby is playing football.

Use consistent present simple/present continuous: 'I don't think' is correct; avoid 'I'm only having'—use 'my only hobby is'. 'Similar hobbies as compared to' should be 'similar hobbies compared to' or 'similar to'. Remove redundancy. Use 'as you get older' for natural expression. (Grammar problem type ID: 6)

× Uh I never, I think I never asked them about their hobbies. So they usually busy in their work as my father is a farmer so he didn't get any time for their hobbies. So uh and my mother was also a housewife so both of them are really busy so I don't think so I have like similar hobbies.

✓ I don't think I ever asked them about their hobbies. They are usually busy with their work; my father is a farmer, so he doesn't have time for hobbies. My mother is a housewife and is also very busy, so I don't think I have similar hobbies to theirs.

Use correct tense and pronouns: 'I never, I think I never asked' is awkward—use 'I don't think I ever asked'. 'They usually busy' needs the verb 'are busy'. Match pronouns and possessive forms: 'time for their hobbies' is acceptable but 'so he didn't get any time for their hobbies' mixes past and plural; use 'he doesn't have time for hobbies'. Use 'similar hobbies to theirs' for correct comparison. Maintain present tense for habitual statements. (Grammar problem type ID: 12)