Hobby— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more natural and concise: avoid unnecessary articles and use parallel structure. Add a brief detail to make the answer specific (which sports, what music). Use one topic sentence and one supporting detail linked with a connector.

Ví dụ: Yes. I enjoy playing basketball and listening to pop music. For example, I play basketball twice a week because it helps me stay fit, and I like pop for its upbeat rhythms.

Gợi ý: Start directly with the topic sentence (avoid filler like “Let me think about it”) and be more specific about activities and frequency. Use a linking word to add a detail or reason.

Ví dụ: When I was a child, I liked playing on the playground, especially climbing and swinging. I often went there after school because it was a fun way to meet friends and be active.

Gợi ý: Correct grammar and phrasing, use clearer topic sentence and a supporting detail with linking words. Replace "a Lego" with "building Lego" or "making Lego models." Fix tenses and subject-verb agreement, and give a short example of what you build.

Ví dụ: Yes. I have enjoyed building Lego models since I was a child. For example, I used to build small cars and now I assemble complex sets because building Lego helps me relax and improve my concentration.

Gợi ý: Use correct verb forms and a clear topic sentence. Mention which sports and how often you watch them together, and use a linking word to add a reason or feeling to make it specific.

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually watch football matches with my dad and uncle. We watch games together every weekend, which is a nice way for us to bond and discuss the plays afterwards.

× Yes I have it's a Lego.

✓ Yes, I have one; it's a Lego set.

The student used the definite article 'a' with the uncountable/proper noun 'Lego' incorrectly and combined clauses without punctuation. Use 'a Lego set' or 'one' to indicate a single item and separate clauses with punctuation. Also add a comma after 'Yes' for clarity. Suggestion: say 'Yes, I have one; it's a Lego set.' or 'Yes, I have a Lego set.'

× I love play the Lego since I was young and I still doing it now because it get me focused and relaxed.

✓ I have loved playing with Lego since I was young, and I still do it now because it gets me focused and relaxed.

Multiple issues: 'love play' requires the -ing form after 'love' when describing a habitual activity ('love playing') or use present perfect 'have loved' to show continuous preference since childhood. 'The Lego' should be 'Lego' or 'playing with Lego.' 'I still doing it' lacks the auxiliary 'do' ('I still do it'). 'It get' needs third person singular agreement 'it gets.' Use present perfect ('have loved') to match 'since I was young.' Suggestion: 'I have loved playing with Lego since I was young, and I still do it now because it gets me focused and relaxed.'

× Yes, I love to play sports and listen to the music.

✓ Yes, I love to play sports and listen to music.

The definite article 'the' before 'music' is unnecessary when speaking generally. Use the uncountable noun 'music' without 'the.' Suggestion: say 'I love to play sports and listen to music.'

× My hobby when I was young was playing in the playground.

✓ My hobby when I was young was playing in the playground.

This sentence is grammatically acceptable, but consider a more natural phrasing: 'When I was young, my hobby was playing in the playground' or 'When I was young, I liked playing in the playground.' No correction required for tense, only word order for naturalness.

× I usually watching sports with my family, my dad, my uncle that we do it all together.

✓ I usually watch sports with my family: my dad and my uncle; we do it all together.

'Usually watching' is incorrect because the habitual adverb 'usually' requires the base verb with present simple: 'usually watch.' The clause listing family members needs clearer punctuation and conjunctions ('my dad and my uncle'). 'That we do it all together' is awkward; replace with 'we do it all together' as a separate clause. Suggestion: 'I usually watch sports with my family — my dad and my uncle — and we do it all together.'