Hobby— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is natural and relevant, with clear reasons and a personal detail, but it's slightly redundant and has small coherence issues (e.g. 'the friendship is a plus point in the court'). To improve, make the response more concise, avoid filler phrases like 'you know', and use clearer linking words to connect reasons. Also vary vocabulary slightly (e.g. 'benefit' instead of 'plus point') and correct minor phrasing issues.

Ví dụ: I enjoy playing pickleball; I play three to four times a week because it keeps me active and helps me reach my daily goal of 10,000 steps. Additionally, playing with friends is enjoyable and motivates me to practice regularly.

Gợi ý: Good direct response with a clear topic and personal background, but the sentence structure is somewhat repetitive and a bit ungrammatical ('one of my foundation'). Improve by using shorter sentences, correct grammar (e.g. 'one of the foundations'), and add a linking phrase to show the connection to the present.

Ví dụ: When I was about eight or nine, I loved playing badminton. It helped me become fitter and more agile, and those skills have formed the foundation for my current interest in pickleball.

Gợi ý: The answer contains good ideas but has several grammatical mistakes, repetitions ('up up'), and unclear phrases ('visit natures', 'doing stuff in my'). To improve, correct verb tenses (use present perfect or present simple), use precise vocabulary ('nature' not 'natures'), avoid repetition, and give one specific example of an outdoor activity to make it concrete.

Ví dụ: I've enjoyed outdoor activities since childhood. For example, I often go hiking and sometimes practice forest bathing, which helps me relax and recharge. I still do these activities regularly.

Gợi ý: The response answers the question directly and adds contrast, but it has informality and grammatical issues ('likes of my family', 'doing stuff that are not outdoor', 'complete opposite of mine'). Improve by using clearer comparative language, reducing fillers like 'you know' and 'I'm,' and giving one example of a family activity to illustrate the difference.

Ví dụ: No, my family and I have different hobbies. For instance, they enjoy shopping at malls and indoor activities, whereas I prefer outdoor pursuits like hiking and playing racket sports.

× Right now I love playing pickleball.

✓ Right now I love playing pickleball.

No grammatical change needed; sentence correctly uses present simple to express a current preference. Keep as is.

× Actually, I'm quite addicted to it.

✓ Actually, I'm quite addicted to it.

No change needed; 'addicted to' correctly followed by pronoun 'it'. The gerund form is not required here.

× I play three to four times a week because this really makes me move a lot and helps me achieve my target 10,000 daily steps.

✓ I play three to four times a week because it really gets me moving and helps me reach my target of 10,000 steps a day.

Use 'it' instead of 'this' to refer to the activity; 'gets me moving' is a more natural phrasal verb than 'makes me move'; 'reach' collocates with 'target' and '10,000 steps a day' is the natural expression. These are present-tense habitual actions, so present simple is correct.

× And you know, the friendship is a plus point in the court.

✓ And you know, the friendships are a plus when you're on the court.

Use plural 'friendships' or 'the friendship' depending on meaning; original 'the friendship is a plus point in the court' is awkward. 'A plus' is the common phrase. Also use 'on the court' rather than 'in the court' for sports.

× Looking back when I was around 8 to 9 years old, I loved playing badminton.

✓ Looking back, when I was around eight or nine years old, I loved playing badminton.

Write numbers under ten in words for spoken-style writing and use 'or' instead of a hyphenated range. Commas improve clarity. Tense 'loved' is appropriate for past habit.

× It has been my sport growing up and it made me more fit and agile and it has been one of my foundation now that I'm playing pickleball.

✓ It was my sport growing up; it made me fitter and more agile, and it has been one of my foundations now that I'm playing pickleball.

Mixing past simple and present perfect needed adjustment. 'Was' fits the past period 'growing up'. 'Made me fitter' uses comparative adjective 'fitter'. 'One of my foundations' requires plural 'foundations'. Present perfect 'has been' is acceptable to link past influence to present.

× Well, I love outdoor activities since I was a child.

✓ Well, I've loved outdoor activities since I was a child.

When an action started in the past and continues to the present, use present perfect 'have loved' rather than simple present 'love' with 'since'.

× I often visit natures and do forest bathing at up up until now I do that from time to time.

✓ I often visit natural areas and do forest bathing; up until now I still do that from time to time.

'Natures' is incorrect; use 'natural areas' or 'nature' (uncountable). Remove duplicate 'up'. Add punctuation and use 'still do that' for continuity. 'From time to time' is fine.

× I just really love being with nature and doing stuff in my.

✓ I just really love being in nature and doing outdoor activities.

Original ends abruptly and 'in my' is incomplete. 'Being in nature' is the correct phrase; replace 'doing stuff' with 'doing outdoor activities' for clarity.

× Unfortunately, no.

✓ Unfortunately, no.

Short answer is acceptable; no grammatical change required.

× You know, it's very surprising that my hobbies and my likes are very different from the likes of my family.

✓ You know, it's very surprising that my hobbies and preferences are very different from those of my family.

Use 'preferences' instead of 'likes' for natural English. Use 'those of my family' to avoid repeating 'likes' and to use correct pronoun reference.

× They prefer going to the malls, doing stuff that are not outdoor.

✓ They prefer going to the mall and doing things that are not outdoors.

Use 'mall' singular or 'the malls' with consistent article; 'things' is the correct plural noun; 'are not outdoors' better than 'not outdoor' — 'outdoor' is an adjective.

× But it's a complete opposite of mine because I'm, I love doing things outdoor.

✓ But it's the complete opposite of mine because I love doing things outdoors.

Use 'the complete opposite' and 'of mine' is acceptable but 'of mine' could be omitted: 'the complete opposite of what I like'. Remove extra comma and repeated 'I'm'. Use 'outdoors' rather than 'outdoor' when talking about activities.