Hobby— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant and gives reasons, but has some repetition, minor grammar errors and slightly informal hesitations. To improve, make a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms (e.g., 'helps' not 'help'), avoid filler words ('so so'), and limit to 2–4 sentences. Add one specific example to make it more concrete.

Ví dụ: I enjoy exercising at the gym and watching news programmes such as BBC News. Watching the news helps me improve my English and keeps me informed about international events. For example, I follow BBC’s evening bulletin to learn new vocabulary and understand different accents.

Gợi ý: The answer attempts to list childhood hobbies but has unclear phrasing and grammar mistakes (e.g., 'had any copies', 'training with ball', 'get play games'). Use a clear topic sentence, then give two specific, well-formed examples with brief details. Use linking words like 'for example' or 'also'.

Ví dụ: Yes, when I was a child I enjoyed watching cartoons, especially English-language ones. I also played ball games with my friends in the park; for example, I often played football after school, which helped me stay active and sociable.

Gợi ý: Your answer states the hobby but is repetitive and contains awkward phrasing ('keep keeping fit', 'Today's day I train'). Improve by using one clear topic sentence, reducing repetition, correcting tense and phrasing, and adding a specific detail about the activity or routine.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have trained since childhood; fitness training has always been my hobby. I now train every day, combining cardio and strength exercises, which helps me stay fit and relieve stress.

Gợi ý: The answer is direct and gives reasons, but contains grammar errors and informal phrasing ('read a book', 'watching news', 'do this things'). Use a clear topic sentence, correct noun/verb forms, and give a brief contrast with a linking word like 'however' or 'whereas'. Avoid subjective absolutes like 'a little bit boring'—give precise reasons.

Ví dụ: No, my hobbies are different from my family’s. Whereas they prefer reading books and watching the news, I find those activities less engaging; I prefer more active pastimes like going to the gym because they help me stay energetic.

× Watching the news help me improve my English skills and keeps me informed about world events.

✓ Watching the news helps me improve my English skills and keeps me informed about world events.

Subject 'Watching the news' is singular gerund phrase, so verb should be third person singular 'helps'. Use 'helps' to match subject-verb agreement; 'keeps' is already correct.

× So so that's the reason why I like it.

✓ So that's the reason why I like it.

Repeated 'So' is a speaking filler and creates awkward repetition. Remove the duplicate to make the sentence concise; keep one 'So' for emphasis.

× Yes, I had any copies when I was a child, like watching cartoons, English cartoons and training with ball and maybe get play games online games.

✓ Yes, I did many things when I was a child, like watching cartoons, English cartoons, training with a ball, and maybe playing online games.

'any copies' is incorrect and unclear; 'many things' fits the intended meaning. Use 'did' for past activities. 'training with ball' needs article 'a ball'. 'get play games online games' should be 'playing online games' — use gerund after 'maybe' for activities.

× That's so interesting for me so.

✓ That was so interesting for me.

In past context ('when I was a child') use past tense 'was' and avoid trailing 'so'. Use simple adjective 'interesting' and remove redundant 'so' at end.

× Yes, of course. I have a hobby that I have had since childhood. It's training.

✓ Yes, of course. I have had a hobby since childhood: training.

Repeating 'have' is redundant. Combine into one clear sentence using present perfect 'have had' and a colon for clarification.

× Today's day I train.

✓ Nowadays I train.

'Today's day' is ungrammatical; use 'Nowadays' to refer to current habitual actions. Keep present simple for routines: 'I train' or 'I train every day'.

× I'm training every day because I'm interested in training, because it helps me to keep keeping fit, so.

✓ I train every day because I'm interested in training; it helps me keep fit.

For habitual actions, use present simple 'I train every day' rather than present continuous. Remove duplicate 'because' and the redundant 'to keep keeping'. Use 'keep fit'.

× No, because my family members prefer to read a book or maybe watching news, but I'm not interested in that because I think it's a little bit boring and I feel exhausted when I do this things.

✓ No, my family members prefer to read books or maybe watch the news, but I'm not interested in that because I think it's a bit boring and I feel exhausted when I do these things.

Use plural 'books' for general preference. Use 'watch the news' with definite article. Use base form 'watch' after 'prefer to'. 'a little bit' can be 'a bit'. 'this things' should be 'these things' (demonstrative pronoun agreement).