Hobby— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific details. Avoid repetition and informal fillers like “that definitely.” Use linking words if adding details.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I enjoy playing badminton and listening to music in my free time. For example, I usually play badminton twice a week at a local club, and I listen to acoustic playlists while studying to relax.

Gợi ý: Use correct tense and grammar and be specific. Begin with a clear past-tense statement, then give one or two reasons with linking words. Avoid vague phrases like “interactive.”

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. When I was a child, I loved playing badminton because it helped me stay fit and was a great way to make friends. For instance, I used to play every weekend with my classmates at the school court.

Gợi ý: Avoid repeating the same idea and correct grammar. State clearly that the hobby continues, then give concise supporting details using linking words like “because” or “so”. Limit to a few sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have continued playing badminton since childhood. Because it keeps me fit and energetic, I still play regularly, and it has helped me build strong friendships through club matches.

Gợi ý: Be concise and correct verb forms. Give one specific example of how the shared hobby affects family life, and use linking words such as “so” or “therefore.”

Ví dụ: Yes, my family and I enjoy playing badminton together. For example, my mother and I play on weekends, which helps us stay fit and also gives us time to talk and understand each other better.

× Yeah, that definitely. I have hobbies.

✓ Yeah, definitely. I have hobbies.

The original contains an extra word 'that' creating an unnatural sentence structure. Remove 'that' to make the response concise and grammatically correct. Use 'Yeah, definitely.' or 'Yes, definitely.' as a natural spoken reply.

× I like to play badminton and listen to music in my free time.

✓ I like to play badminton and listen to music in my free time.

This sentence is already correct in present simple to describe habitual actions. No change is necessary.

× Yes I do, when I am child my hobby is to playing badminton as it helps me to keep fit and interactive and is a great way to socialize with my friends.

✓ Yes I did. When I was a child, my hobby was playing badminton because it helped me keep fit, stay active, and socialize with my friends.

Multiple errors: tense mismatch (childhood is past so use past tense 'did', 'was'), incorrect article/phrase 'when I am child' should be 'when I was a child', incorrect verb form 'is to playing' should be 'was playing' or 'was playing'/'hobby was playing', and word choice 'interactive' is incorrect for a person — use 'active'. Also use 'because' for reason and parallel verbs 'helped me keep fit and stay active'. Commas improve clarity.

× Yes, when I am child I have a hobby of badminton that I still have in my young age because badminton helped me to keep fit and active all the day and help me to make good bond with my friends and also help me me to connect with my friends.

✓ Yes. When I was a child I had a hobby of playing badminton that I still have now because badminton helped me keep fit and active all day, helped me form strong bonds with my friends, and helped me connect with them.

Tense and form errors: 'when I am child' should be 'when I was a child' (past). 'I have a hobby of badminton' -> 'I had a hobby of playing badminton' (use gerund). 'I still have in my young age' -> 'I still have now' (clarify time). Redundant and incorrect verb forms: use past tense 'helped' to match 'when I was a child'. 'All the day' -> 'all day'. 'Make good bond' -> 'form strong bonds'. Removed duplicated 'me'. Ensure parallel verb forms in the list ('helped me keep..., helped me form..., helped me connect...').

× Yes, my mother also like to play badminton in her free time as I also like to play badminton in my free time.

✓ Yes, my mother also likes to play badminton in her free time, and I like to play badminton in my free time.

Subject-verb agreement: 'my mother' is singular so the verb must be 'likes' (third person singular). Also improve cohesion by connecting clauses with 'and'.

× We all play badminton in our free time and is a better way to keep all of the members fit and active and also help us to make good bond and understanding with others.

✓ We all play badminton in our free time. It is a good way to keep everyone fit and active and to help us build strong bonds and understanding with others.

The original has a missing subject in the clause 'and is a better way' — needs 'It is'. 'All of the members' is awkward; use 'everyone'. 'Make good bond' should be 'build strong bonds'. Use parallel infinitives 'to keep... and to help...'. Break into two sentences for clarity.