Hobby— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 句子语法和词汇使用需改进，避免重复和犹豫词（uh）。回答应更直接并使用连贯连接词。同时注意单复数（one hobby），更具体说明练习频率和感受。建议练习简短清晰的主题句，然后用一到两句具体细节支持。

Ví dụ: I have one main hobby: Chinese calligraphy, which I have practiced since I was ten. I usually practice it before the Lunar New Year because it helps me feel connected to tradition, and I often give my calligraphy works to family members as New Year gifts.

Gợi ý: 表达不够流利且有重复和语法错误。应直接回答并用一到两句具体原因或例子支持，使用连接词（for example, because）来组织信息。注意形容词和结构（healthy, keep me calm）。

Ví dụ: Yes, I had several active hobbies as a child, especially running and skipping. I enjoyed running because it kept me physically fit and also helped me to stay calm and relieve stress after a busy day.

Gợi ý: 句子结构需要更准确，时态和短语使用错误（since I would turn）。要用清晰的时间表达并在支持句中提供具体细节，如学习经历、学习内容或感受，使用连接词（because, after, when）。避免重复单词。

Ví dụ: Yes, I have practiced Chinese calligraphy since childhood. I learned it in a traditional painting and calligraphy class where my teacher taught me basic techniques, and I enjoy it because it relaxes me and helps me connect with my cultural heritage.

Gợi ý: 回答含混且有许多填充词和语法错误。应先给出肯定或否定的主题句，然后用一两句具体说明家庭活动（who runs, when, how often）并解释好处。使用恰当词汇（stay fit, lose weight, calm down）。

Ví dụ: Yes, my family shares the hobby of running. My parents, my brother and I often go for a run together every morning; it helps us stay fit, lose weight and feel mentally refreshed.

× I only have one hobbies in calligraphy since uh, I was 10.

✓ I only have one hobby in calligraphy since I was 10.

句子中使用了數量詞 "one"，但名詞用複數形式 "hobbies"，應與單數一致。建議把 "hobbies" 改為單數形式 "hobby"，或將數詞改為複數（如 "many hobbies"）。另外可刪去多餘的填詞如 "uh"。

× I usually practice it around new year because it helps me to connect, connect with the uh, tradition and uh, I can uh, send to my families as a new year gift which can show my hobbies.

✓ I usually practice it around the New Year because it helps me connect with tradition and I can send my calligraphy to my family as a New Year gift which shows my hobby.

問題包括現在進行/不定式結構與詞語搭配："helps me to connect, connect with" 重複且語序不自然，英語常用 "helps me connect" 或 "helps me to connect"。"send to my families" 中 "families" 應為單數或集合名詞 "my family"，且動詞用法應為 "send something to someone"，應明確受詞為 "my calligraphy"。"which can show my hobbies" 表達不自然，應改為 "which shows my hobby" 或更自然的描述。以上均屬現在分詞/不定式與搭配不當，需調整動詞形式和名詞數。

× Did you have any hobbies when you were a child? Student: Of course I did since I was a child. I I'd like to go the go running and skipping.

✓ Of course I did when I was a child. I liked to go running and skipping.

此處問句使用過去時（Did... when you were a child），回答也應使用過去時。學生回答使用了現在時態 "I'd like"（或縮寫導致混淆）和不必要的重複 "go the go"。正確用過去時 "liked" 表示過去的喜好，並刪去多餘詞語。

× Maybe it's running. I think it can not only can be health healthy to my body, but also can keep my keep me calm down.

✓ Maybe it's running. I think it can not only be healthy for my body, but also keep me calm.

句中有形容詞/副詞使用錯誤與冗餘：重複使用助動詞 "can not only can" 應為 "can not only ... but also ..." 或 "not only ... but also ..."；"be health healthy" 是形容詞拼寫與重複錯誤，應為 "be healthy"；搭配應使用介詞 "healthy for my body" 而非 "to my body"；"keep my keep me calm down" 有冗餘並且 "calm down" 一般用於自己平靜下來，直接說 "keep me calm" 更自然。

× I have a hobby of practice Chinese calligraphy since I would turn.

✓ I have had a hobby of practicing Chinese calligraphy since I was young.

原句時態與動詞形式不當："have a hobby of practice" 中名詞化動詞應用動名詞 "practicing"；表示從過去開始持續到現在應用現在完成時 "have had ... since ..."，並且 "since I would turn" 不正確，應用具體時間或短語如 "since I was young" 或 "since I was ten"。

× I learned it in a traditional Chinese painting and calligraphy class and my teacher told me the basic basic technique course and I enjoy it because it helped me to relax and connect with the culture in my country.

✓ I learned it in a traditional Chinese painting and calligraphy class; my teacher taught me the basic techniques and I enjoy it because it helps me relax and connect with my country's culture.

句中 "told me the basic basic technique course" 用詞和介詞不當：應使用 "taught me the basic techniques" 而非 "told me"；"connect with the culture in my country" 中介詞用法較冗長，改為更自然的 "connect with my country's culture"。此外時態應一致，描述現在習慣時使用現在時 "helps" 而非過去 "helped"。

× Do you have the same hobbies as your family members? Student: Uh, maybe it's running. Oh, me and my father and my brother and my mom, we all always keep the running in the morning.

✓ Uh, maybe it's running. My father, my brother, my mother and I all always go running in the morning.

"me and my father..." 主格應為 "my father ... and I"；"keep the running" 是錯誤搭配，應為 "go running" 或 "keep running"；人稱和語序需調整為更自然的英文表達。

× Uh, we, we, we not it not only can stay our feet, but also can, uh, keep our came down and kick weight kick us out of.

✓ We not only can keep fit, but it also helps us calm down and lose weight.

原句中代詞與詞彙混亂："stay our feet" 並非正確表達，應為 "keep fit"（保持健康）；"keep our came down" 可能意為 "calm down"，應改為 "helps us calm down"；"kick weight kick us out of" 無意義，應為 "lose weight"。同時保持句子結構完整，將片語和代詞正確使用。