Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like chatting with friends?
Thí sinh
Yes, I love chatting with my friends because it makes me feel comfortable and I feel so easy to talk. Like chatting is the only one platform where we can share our boundaries and make our relationship stronger.
Giám khảo
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Thí sinh
Usually I chat my friends about like, uh, memorable moments, umm, like for example, whenever I go somewhere and I found something interesting like, umm, I'll definitely talk to them about that. So yeah, some moment like this.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Thí sinh
I think it's better to chat with only one friend better than a group of people, because a group of people are may not be able to hear us and as we all know everybody is not our one friends. They are like snake, they will bite us from our back. So I think I prefer only one friend.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Thí sinh
Oh, I prefer communicate in social media because I don't have any self-confidence to communicate face to face because I'm really low at myself motivation and I found much easier in social media as we can express our our all feelings and the way we really feel so.
Giám khảo
Do you argue with friends?
Thí sinh
No, I never argue with my friends. Like, uh, we only argue sometimes, uh, because if you, if you never argue, how our friendship will uh, go long last. Like I agree it's also one of the main part and it's loving moment too, not like a big fighting issue. It's a small argue.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Điểm: 68.0Gợi ý: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition and vague phrases, and add one brief specific example. Use linking words if adding support.
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and strengthen our bond. For example, when I’m stressed after work, talking with a close friend usually helps me feel better and gives practical advice.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Reduce hesitation and be specific: give one or two clear topics and a concrete example. Use linking words (for example, also, such as) to organise your answer.
Ví dụ: We usually talk about memorable moments, such as trips or funny incidents. For example, when I visited a museum last month, I sent photos and told them about an unusual exhibit I saw.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Avoid extreme or informal metaphors and grammatical errors. State preference clearly, then give two concise reasons with linking words. Keep tone neutral and natural.
Ví dụ: I prefer talking one-on-one rather than in a group because it’s easier to have a meaningful conversation and you can speak freely. Also, in a one-on-one chat you get more attention and fewer interruptions.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: Express your preference clearly and avoid overly negative self-descriptions. Give one or two concrete reasons and a brief example. Use smoother grammar and remove repetition.
Ví dụ: I prefer communicating via social media because I feel more comfortable expressing myself online. For example, I can take time to think about my messages and share photos or links that explain my feelings better.
Do you argue with friends?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: Be consistent and avoid contradictions. Start with a clear statement, then clarify with a balanced view: explain why small disagreements can be healthy and give a short example. Use linking words like however or sometimes.
Ví dụ: I don’t have big arguments with my friends, but we do sometimes have small disagreements, which I think is natural. For instance, we once disagreed about where to go on holiday, but after discussing it calmly we reached a compromise.
× Yes, I love chatting with my friends because it makes me feel comfortable and I feel so easy to talk.
✓ Yes, I love chatting with my friends because it makes me feel comfortable and I find it easy to talk.
'I feel so easy to talk' is ungrammatical. Use the adjective 'easy' with a verb like 'find' or use the adverb 'easily'. The correct construction is 'I find it easy to talk' or 'I can talk easily.' This fixes incorrect adjective/adverb use and produces a natural English phrase. Grammar problem type ID:13
× Like chatting is the only one platform where we can share our boundaries and make our relationship stronger.
✓ Chatting is the only platform where we can share our boundaries and make our relationships stronger.
'Only one platform' is redundant; 'the only platform' is correct. 'Relationship' should be plural when referring to relationships with multiple friends. This addresses singular/plural mismatch and word choice for natural expression. Grammar problem type ID:1
× Usually I chat my friends about like, uh, memorable moments, umm, like for example, whenever I go somewhere and I found something interesting like, umm, I'll definitely talk to them about that.
✓ Usually I chat with my friends about memorable moments. For example, when I go somewhere and find something interesting, I'll definitely tell them about it.
Use 'chat with my friends' (need preposition 'with'). 'Found' should be present simple 'find' to match 'when I go' (general present). 'Talk to them about that' is more naturally 'tell them about it.' This fixes incorrect preposition and tense consistency. Grammar problem type ID:11
× So yeah, some moment like this.
✓ So yeah, moments like this.
The phrase 'some moment like this' is awkward; plural 'moments like this' fits general statements. There is no third person verb here, but the correction addresses number and natural phrasing. Grammar problem type ID:2
× I think it's better to chat with only one friend better than a group of people, because a group of people are may not be able to hear us and as we all know everybody is not our one friends.
✓ I think it's better to chat with one friend rather than with a group, because a group may not be able to hear us, and not everyone is our friend.
Problems corrected: remove redundant 'better', use 'rather than' for comparison, 'a group' is singular so 'may' not 'are may'. 'Everybody is not our one friends' is incorrect pronoun and number—use 'not everyone is our friend.' This fixes pronoun problems, subject-verb agreement, and plurality. Grammar problem type ID:12
× They are like snake, they will bite us from our back.
✓ They are like snakes; they may stab us in the back.
'They are like snake' should be plural 'snakes.' 'Bite us from our back' is unnatural in English; common idiom is 'stab us in the back.' This fixes plurality and idiomatic phrasing (sentence structure). Grammar problem type ID:26
× Oh, I prefer communicate in social media because I don't have any self-confidence to communicate face to face because I'm really low at myself motivation and I found much easier in social media as we can express our our all feelings and the way we really feel so.
✓ Oh, I prefer communicating on social media because I don't have the confidence to communicate face to face. I'm low on self-motivation, and I find it much easier on social media because we can express all our feelings and the way we really feel.
Use gerund 'communicating' after 'prefer.' Preposition: 'on social media' not 'in.' 'Self-confidence' or 'the confidence' is better than 'any self-confidence.' 'Low on self-motivation' is the correct idiom. 'Found' should be 'find' to match present preference. Remove duplicate 'our' and reorder 'all our feelings.' This fixes preposition, verb form, tense consistency, and word order. Grammar problem type ID:11
× No, I never argue with my friends. Like, uh, we only argue sometimes, uh, because if you, if you never argue, how our friendship will uh, go long last.
✓ No, I don't argue with my friends. Sometimes we argue, because if you never argue, how will our friendship last?
'I never argue' is possible but inconsistent with 'we only argue sometimes.' Use present simple 'I don't argue' or 'I seldom argue.' Word order in question 'how our friendship will go long last' is incorrect; correct form is 'how will our friendship last' or 'how will our friendship go on.' This fixes tense and sentence structure. Grammar problem type ID:5
× Like I agree it's also one of the main part and it's loving moment too, not like a big fighting issue.
✓ I agree it's also one of the main parts and it's a loving moment too, not a big fight.
'Main part' should be plural 'main parts' or 'one of the main aspects.' 'Loving moment' is acceptable but needs article 'a.' 'Big fighting issue' is awkward; 'a big fight' is natural. This corrects adjective/adverb and article usage. Grammar problem type ID:13
× It's a small argue.
✓ It's a small argument.
'Argue' is a verb; the correct noun is 'argument.' This fixes incorrect word class/pronoun use. Grammar problem type ID:12