Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be clear, grammatically correct and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence, correct plural/singular and verb forms, and avoid redundancy. Add one specific detail using a linking word. Keep to 1–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes. There are several rules at my school, but the most important one is a strict ban on cheating. For example, if a student is caught copying during an exam, they automatically fail that paper.

Gợi ý: Give a clear opinion first, then support it with specific reasons and linking words such as 'however' or 'for example'. Use correct grammar and vocabulary (e.g., 'strict' not 'stick', 'students try to break rules' not 'try to be break it'). Limit to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: It depends. More rules can help maintain discipline; however, if rules are too strict, students may try to break them. For example, overly harsh restrictions on free time can make students resentful and less motivated.

Gợi ý: Answer directly with a clear past-tense statement, then add a specific example of what the teacher did. Use correct verb tenses and complete sentences, avoid filler words. Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a very dedicated physics teacher in high school. Although I struggled to concentrate, he stayed after class to explain concepts and gave me extra exercises until I improved.

Gợi ý: State your preference clearly and give a reason with a supporting detail using linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Use correct phrasing (e.g., 'I prefer a relaxed atmosphere' not 'feel lose'). Keep to 1–2 sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer fewer rules because a relaxed atmosphere helps students learn independently. Only important rules, such as safety and academic honesty, should be enforced.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear topic sentence, then give a specific example using correct modal verbs and passive/active forms. Avoid vague phrasing and keep it concise. Use linking words like 'for example' to introduce details.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a very strict teacher who enforced the school uniform rigorously. For example, if a student forgot a required pin, she would give a warning or detention when she noticed it.

Gợi ý: Provide a clear opinion and a concise reason using linking words such as 'because' or 'because of'. Use natural phrasing ('guidance' instead of 'lead the appropriate way'). One or two sentences are enough.

Ví dụ: I wouldn't want to work in a rule-free school because some rules are necessary to provide guidance and ensure students' safety. For instance, rules about attendance and behaviour help create a productive learning environment.

× There are several kind of rule but one looked at important for our school is you don't have to be cheat on your exam.

✓ There are several kinds of rules, but one looked most important for our school is that you must not cheat on your exams.

The noun phrases require plural forms: 'several' needs 'kinds' and 'rules'. 'Exam' should be plural 'exams' for general rule. Also added 'that' and changed 'don't have to be cheat' to 'must not cheat' for correct modal and verb form. Suggestion: match determiners and nouns (several + plural), and use correct verb forms with modals.

× If you did it you will fail.

✓ If you do it, you will fail.

'If' conditional with future result requires present simple in the if-clause, not past tense. Use 'If you do it' + 'you will fail'. Suggestion: for real future conditions use present tense in the condition clause.

× It depends, some rule is too much stick so the student try to be break it.

✓ It depends; some rules are too strict, so students try to break them.

'Some' requires plural noun 'rules'. Use 'are' for plural. 'Too much stick' is incorrect — 'too strict' is the proper adjective. 'The student' general meaning uses plural 'students'. 'Try to be break it' is ungrammatical; use 'try to break them'. Suggestion: ensure noun number matches determiners and use correct adjective and verb forms.

× But some rule has a benefit to remit them for unapproved inappropriate things.

✓ But some rules have the benefit of deterring them from inappropriate or unauthorised behaviour.

Original uses incorrect verb 'remit' and wrong prepositions. Use 'have the benefit of deterring someone from' to express prevention. Also plural 'rules' and clearer nouns 'inappropriate or unauthorised behaviour'. Suggestion: choose verbs and prepositions that match intended meaning (prevent/deter from + noun).

× Yes, I have when I'm in high school, I'm not really into uh physics subject and I don't concentrate with is must.

✓ Yes, I did when I was in high school. I wasn't really into physics and I didn't concentrate as I should have.

Mixes present perfect with past context — 'when I was in high school' requires past simple 'I did'. 'I'm not really into uh physics subject' should be past 'I wasn't really into physics'. 'I don't concentrate with is must' is incorrect; use 'I didn't concentrate as I should have' to express lacking focus. Suggestion: keep past narration in past tense and use correct idiomatic expressions.

× But the teacher he never give up and he.

✓ But the teacher never gave up.

Redundant subject 'the teacher he' is incorrect; use single subject. Use past tense 'gave up' to match past narrative. The sentence fragment 'and he.' is incomplete and removed. Suggestion: avoid redundant pronouns and complete sentences.

× I prefer to have feel lose at school because I think just the important rule does necessary.

✓ I prefer schools to feel more relaxed because I think only the important rules are necessary.

Original mixes forms: 'to have feel lose' is ungrammatical — use 'schools to feel more relaxed' or 'to have a more relaxed atmosphere'. 'Just the important rule does necessary' should be 'only the important rules are necessary' with plural agreement and correct use of 'necessary'. Suggestion: use clear noun phrases and correct verb 'are' for plural.

× Yes I have she really stick with the school uniform.

✓ Yes, I have; she is very strict about the school uniform.

Original 'she really stick with' is incorrect verb form and collocation. Use 'is strict about' to describe enforcement. Also punctuation added. Suggestion: use 'be + adjective' to describe someone's attitude and correct preposition 'about'.

× If you forgot something on your uniform such as a pin, you must be punishment if she notice this.

✓ If you forget something on your uniform, such as a pin, you will be punished if she notices it.

Conditional timing: use present simple 'If you forget' for real conditions. 'Must be punishment' is wrong; use passive 'will be punished'. Verb agreement: 'she notices'. Also 'it' for the object. Suggestion: for conditional future outcomes use present + will, and form passive correctly with 'be + past participle'.

× I don't think so. At least the school should have some rule to lead the appropriate way for students.

✓ I don't think so. At least the school should have some rules to guide students in the appropriate ways.

'Some rule' should be plural 'some rules'. 'To lead the appropriate way for students' is awkward — use 'to guide students in the appropriate ways'. Also article 'the school' is acceptable but 'some rules' improves idiomaticity. Suggestion: use plural for countable rules and prefer 'guide' + 'students' with plural 'ways' or 'behaviour'.