Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 文法の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。特に時制の一致や単数・複数の使い分けに注意しましょう。また、文を簡潔にし、論理的に繋げるために接続詞を使うことを意識してください。

Ví dụ: When I was a junior high school student, there were strict rules. For example, students were not allowed to bring phones to school, which helped them concentrate on their studies.

Gợi ý: 内容が不明瞭で、文法や語彙の誤りが多いです。意見を述べる際は、理由や具体例を明確にし、接続詞を使って文を繋げる練習をしましょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think more rules can help students. Although many students dislike rules, they are important because they help students focus on their studies.

Gợi ý: 文法の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。過去形の使い方や単数・複数の一致に注意し、具体的な説明を加えて話を豊かにしましょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a teacher when I was in junior high school who did her job very well. She was my classroom teacher and had experience helping organizers abroad.

× When I was junior high school student, there are loose student, student must not take their phones on the school and it is good because they can concentrate on study.

✓ When I was a junior high school student, there were loose students, students must not take their phones to school and it is good because they can concentrate on their studies.

The sentence has singular and plural issues: 'junior high school student' should be 'a junior high school student' (singular with article), 'there are loose student' should be 'there were loose students' (plural and past tense agreement), 'student must not take their phones' should be 'students must not take their phones' (plural). Also, 'on the school' is incorrect preposition usage, but that is addressed separately. 'Concentrate on study' should be 'concentrate on their studies' for correct plural and possessive usage.

× When I was junior high school student, there are loose student, student must not take their phones on the school and it is good because they can concentrate on study.

✓ When I was a junior high school student, there were loose students, students must not take their phones to school and it is good because they can concentrate on their studies.

The phrase 'there are loose student' is incorrect because the tense does not match the past time frame ('When I was...'). It should be 'there were loose students' to correctly use the past tense of 'there be' and plural form.

× When I was junior high school student, there are loose student, student must not take their phones on the school and it is good because they can concentrate on study.

✓ When I was a junior high school student, there were loose students, students must not take their phones to school and it is good because they can concentrate on their studies.

The preposition 'on the school' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'to school' when referring to bringing something to the school premises.

× Lulu is sometimes are most people, most students don't like rules, but those rules make students concentrated on study.

✓ Lulu is sometimes like most people; most students don't like rules, but those rules make students concentrate on their studies.

The phrase 'Lulu is sometimes are most people' is incorrect; 'are' is unnecessary and 'most people' should be connected properly. Also, 'make students concentrated' is incorrect; it should be 'make students concentrate' (verb base form after 'make'). 'Concentrated on study' should be 'concentrate on their studies' for correct verb form and plural noun.

× Lulu is sometimes are most people, most students don't like rules, but those rules make students concentrated on study.

✓ Lulu is sometimes like most people; most students don't like rules, but those rules make students concentrate on their studies.

After causative verb 'make', the base form of the verb should be used, not the past participle or -ed form. Therefore, 'make students concentrated' is incorrect; it should be 'make students concentrate'.

× Yes, I have when I was a junior high school student. I have a teacher, she is my classroom teacher. She have experience for abroad helping organizers.

✓ Yes, I had one when I was a junior high school student. I had a teacher; she was my classroom teacher. She has experience abroad helping organizers.

The sentence has singular/plural and tense issues: 'I have' should be 'I had' to match past tense, 'She have' should be 'She has' for third person singular present tense. 'Experience for abroad' is incorrect preposition usage; it should be 'experience abroad'. Also, 'Yes, I have when I was...' is awkward; 'Yes, I had one when I was...' is clearer.