Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure for clarity.

Ví dụ: Yes, there are several rules at my school to maintain discipline and encourage good behavior. For example, students must arrive on time and complete their homework to achieve high performance.

Gợi ý: Your answer is confusing and lacks coherence. Start with a clear opinion, then use linking words to explain your reasoning with specific examples. Avoid vague phrases and improve grammar for better clarity.

Ví dụ: I don't think more rules always benefit students. While some rules can improve order and efficiency, too many rules may create difficulties and lead to disobedience.

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally clear but contains some repetition and minor grammatical errors. Use a clear topic sentence followed by specific supporting details with linking words to improve coherence and naturalness.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have a teacher who does his job very well. He is polite and punctual, and he genuinely cares about students' learning, which makes his lessons effective and enjoyable.

× Yes, of course there there is several rules in my school because they want to make discipline in our school to collect the students because of their behavior and have the high performance for them.

✓ Yes, of course there are several rules in my school because they want to maintain discipline in our school, to control the students because of their behavior, and to help them achieve high performance.

The phrase 'there is several rules' is incorrect because 'rules' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. This is a common 'There be' issue where the verb must agree in number with the noun following it.

× And not at all. It depends on the road, but in some cases we can see that it works and more rules equal to the better and more efficient situation for them.

✓ Not at all. It depends on the rule, but in some cases we can see that it works and more rules lead to a better and more efficient situation for them.

Starting a sentence with 'And' is generally informal and unnecessary here. Also, 'road' is likely a typo for 'rule'. The phrase 'more rules equal to the better' is incorrect; it should be 'more rules lead to a better'. The conjunction 'and' is misused to connect ideas that require clearer linking.

× But in other cases it doesn't work and it will cause hard circumstances which wouldn't obey.

✓ However, in other cases it doesn't work and it will cause difficult circumstances which people wouldn't obey.

Starting a sentence with 'But' is informal; 'However' is more appropriate. The phrase 'hard circumstances' is better expressed as 'difficult circumstances'. The clause 'which wouldn't obey' is unclear; it should specify who wouldn't obey, e.g., 'which people wouldn't obey'.

× And yes, of course I have a really polite and punctual teacher who really cares about students lessons and in in my opinion he's he is acting very well about his job and I can't see any negative point about it.

✓ Yes, of course I have a really polite and punctual teacher who really cares about students' lessons and, in my opinion, he is doing his job very well and I can't see any negative points about it.

The phrase 'students lessons' needs a possessive apostrophe to become 'students' lessons'. The repeated 'he's he is' is redundant; only one form should be used. 'Acting very well about his job' is awkward; 'doing his job very well' is correct. Also, 'negative point' should be pluralized to 'negative points' to match the context.