Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer needs to be clearer and more organized. Start with a direct response, then explain the rules specifically. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, students must not engage in vandalism and should always respect their classmates, teachers, and staff. These rules help us develop self-discipline and prepare us to be responsible citizens in the future.

Gợi ý: Your answer is too short and unclear. Provide a clear opinion with reasons and examples. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid vague expressions.

Ví dụ: Definitely, I believe that having more rules can benefit students. This is because rules teach us discipline, which is useful not only at school but also at home and in other places. For instance, following rules helps us develop good habits that last a lifetime.

Gợi ý: Your answer is confusing and grammatically incorrect. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give specific examples of how the teacher helps. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have a teacher named Ronald who does his job very well. He always helps us when we don't understand the lessons. For example, he gives us clues and explains difficult parts of our assignments, which makes learning easier for us.

× Yes, we have, including the vandalism and to respect your fellow classmates, your fellow teachers and other workers in the schools.

✓ Yes, we have rules, including rules against vandalism and respecting your fellow classmates, your fellow teachers, and other workers in the school.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'including the vandalism and to respect' which is awkward and ungrammatical. The preposition 'including' should be followed by nouns or noun phrases, so 'rules against vandalism' and 'respecting' are more appropriate. Also, 'in the schools' should be 'in the school' to refer to the specific school context.

× And also it allows us to discipline ourselves, to help us to teach not for ourselves, but for the younger generations.

✓ It also allows us to discipline ourselves and helps us to teach not for ourselves, but for the younger generations.

The phrase 'to help us to teach' is awkward and the conjunction 'and' is better to connect the two ideas. Also, 'And also' is redundant; 'It also' is clearer. The preposition use is improved by restructuring the sentence for clarity.

× It's very big impact for students to have more disciplines, especially for yourself, not for the school only, but also for their home or whatever they go, they can, they will use it.

✓ It has a very big impact for students to have more discipline, especially for themselves, not only for the school but also for their home or wherever they go; they can and will use it.

'Very big impact' should be 'a very big impact' to include the article. 'More disciplines' is incorrect; 'discipline' is uncountable here. 'Yourself' should be 'themselves' to agree with 'students'. 'Not for the school only' is better as 'not only for the school'. 'Whatever they go' is incorrect; 'wherever they go' is correct.

× Yes, I have this one teachers his name, his teacher Ronald will help us a lot, especially when we don't know what did you like.

✓ Yes, I have this one teacher; his name is Ronald. He helps us a lot, especially when we don't know what to do.

'This one teachers' is incorrect; it should be 'this one teacher' (singular). The sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'His teacher Ronald' is awkward; better to say 'his name is Ronald'. 'What did you like' is incorrect in this context; likely meant 'what to do'.

× For example, he helped us for to for our assignments to he give us clue or he give us a lot of things.

✓ For example, he helped us with our assignments; he gives us clues and provides us with a lot of help.

'Helped us for to for our assignments' is ungrammatical; the correct preposition is 'helped us with our assignments'. 'He give us clue' should be 'he gives us clues' to agree in number and tense. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.