Part 1
Giám khảo
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Thí sinh
Of course, there are a lot of rules in my school, for example, students have restrict guideline to help them for the class attendance and also the final exam to ensure the fairness. In addition, we also have academic rules to help students maintain discipline and improve the.
Giám khảo
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Thí sinh
I think it depends because the rules can help students maintain discipline and ensure the school have a better learning environment. But too many rules can can limit the student creativity and motivation and made it hard for them to express themselves.
Giám khảo
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think most teachers around me can do their job really well. For example, my economics teacher prepared his lesson very well and he often arranged the company visit to bring us to the real industry to make the our theory come into practice. It's very engaging.
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题,例如“students have restrict guideline”应为“students have strict guidelines”。建议注意语法准确性,避免表达模糊,同时回答应更简洁明了。
Ví dụ: Yes, there are many rules at my school. For example, students must follow strict guidelines for class attendance and final exams to ensure fairness. Additionally, there are academic rules to maintain discipline and improve learning.
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答表达较为清晰,但存在语法错误,如“can can”和“made it hard”应为“make it hard”。建议注意时态和单复数一致,避免重复词汇,使表达更流畅。
Ví dụ: I think it depends. Rules help students maintain discipline and create a better learning environment. However, too many rules can limit students' creativity and motivation, making it hard for them to express themselves.
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答内容具体且有例子,但存在语法和表达不自然的问题,如“make the our theory come into practice”应为“put our theory into practice”。建议注意句子结构和词汇搭配,使表达更地道。
Ví dụ: Yes, I believe most teachers do their jobs well. For instance, my economics teacher prepares lessons thoroughly and often arranges company visits to help us put our theory into practice. This makes learning very engaging.
× students have restrict guideline to help them for the class attendance and also the final exam to ensure the fairness.
✓ students have restrictive guidelines to help them with class attendance and also the final exam to ensure fairness.
这里的“guideline”应该用复数形式“guidelines”,因为前面有“a lot of rules”,表示多条规则,且“restrict”应为形容词“restrictive”,表示限制性的,且介词应为“help them with”而不是“help them for”。
× In addition, we also have academic rules to help students maintain discipline and improve the.
✓ In addition, we also have academic rules to help students maintain discipline and improve themselves.
句子末尾缺少宾语,导致句子不完整,应补充“themselves”作为宾语,表示“提高他们自己”。
× But too many rules can can limit the student creativity and motivation and made it hard for them to express themselves.
✓ But too many rules can limit student creativity and motivation and make it hard for them to express themselves.
“can can”重复,应去掉一个“can”;“made”应与前面的“can”保持一致,使用原形动词“make”;“the student creativity”中“the”不必要,应为“student creativity”。
× and made it hard for them to express themselves.
✓ and make it hard for them to express themselves.
这里“made”时态错误,应为“make”,与情态动词“can”搭配使用,且“the”在“student creativity”中不应出现。
× he often arranged the company visit to bring us to the real industry to make the our theory come into practice.
✓ he often arranged company visits to bring us to real industries to make our theory come into practice.
“the company visit”应为复数“company visits”,且不需要定冠词“the”;“the real industry”应为复数“real industries”,且不需要定冠词;“the our theory”中“the”多余,应去掉。