Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and a bit lengthy. Try to be more concise and directly answer the question first, then add specific details using linking words. Also, pay attention to grammar and sentence structure to make your answer more natural and effective.

Ví dụ: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, students are divided into houses, and we must stay loyal to our assigned house. This system helps maintain discipline and encourages healthy competition among students.

Gợi ý: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence and support it with reasons using linking words. Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences to make your answer more effective.

Ví dụ: I don't think more rules would benefit students. Nowadays, students prefer some freedom to make their own choices. Therefore, having too many rules can feel burdensome and restrict their personal growth.

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally good but can be improved by using more precise vocabulary and linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, try to avoid repetition and ensure grammatical accuracy for a more natural response.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a science teacher who was very kind and dedicated. Not only did he help us with our studies, but he also supported us in extracurricular activities, which made learning enjoyable and well-rounded.

× I think the rules are very important to be in the school as they helps the children to be in the discipline.

✓ I think the rules are very important to be in the school as they help the children to be disciplined.

The verb 'helps' does not agree with the plural subject 'they'. The correct verb form is 'help' to match the plural subject. Also, 'to be in the discipline' is incorrect; it should be 'to be disciplined' to convey the intended meaning.

× So the one of the main rule, if I can talk about is we do have houses and we have to be in that particular house, the one that are assigned by like the teachers of our.

✓ So one of the main rules, if I can talk about, is we do have houses and we have to be in that particular house, the one that is assigned by the teachers to us.

The phrase 'the one of the main rule' is incorrect; it should be 'one of the main rules' because 'one of' is followed by a plural noun. Also, 'the one that are assigned' is incorrect because 'one' is singular and requires 'is assigned'. The phrase 'teachers of our' is incomplete and should be 'teachers to us' for clarity.

× So they're not. There shouldn't be a lot of rules to honor the children.

✓ So they feel burdened. There shouldn't be a lot of rules to burden the children.

The sentence 'So they're not.' is incomplete and unclear. It should be rephrased to 'So they feel burdened.' to convey the intended meaning. Also, 'to honor the children' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'to burden the children' to express the negative effect of too many rules.

× He was very, very kind and loyal towards his children.

✓ He was very, very kind and loyal to his children.

The preposition 'towards' is less commonly used in this context. The correct preposition is 'to' when expressing loyalty or kindness directed at someone.

× And also he helps not in the studies and he also helps in the other curricular activities to us as well.

✓ And also he does not help with the studies, and he also helps us with other curricular activities as well.

The phrase 'he helps not in the studies' is incorrect. The correct form is 'he does not help with the studies'. Also, 'helps in the other curricular activities to us' is awkward; it should be 'helps us with other curricular activities'. The verb 'help' is followed by 'with' when referring to assistance in activities.