Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer needs to be more natural and clear. Avoid repetition like "there there" and use correct tense consistently. Also, be more specific about the rules and use linking words to organize your answer better. Try to limit your answer to 3-4 sentences for clarity.

Ví dụ: When I was in high school, there were several rules for students. For example, we were not allowed to dye our hair, wear many earrings, or grow our hair too long. These rules helped maintain discipline and a neat appearance among students.

Gợi ý: Your answer is incomplete and has grammatical errors. Use correct subject-verb agreement and complete your thoughts. Also, use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific reasons why more rules could be beneficial.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe students would benefit from more rules because they help maintain a healthy and orderly environment. Moreover, rules teach students important lessons about discipline and personal responsibility, which are useful in their daily lives.

Gợi ý: Your answer is good but can be improved by avoiding redundancy and using linking words for coherence. Also, try to be more specific about how the teachers influenced you.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have had many teachers who did their jobs very well and became my role models. They shaped who I am today by providing support and motivation, which helped me overcome challenges and succeed academically.

× Back when I was in high school there there are several rules for students like for example avoiding coloring here, having a lot of earrings and growing your hair.

✓ Back when I was in high school there were several rules for students like for example avoiding coloring hair, having a lot of earrings and growing your hair.

The sentence refers to a past time ('Back when I was in high school'), so the verb 'are' should be in the past form 'were' to match the past context. Also, 'coloring here' seems to be a typo and should be 'coloring hair' to make sense.

× Yes, because setting rules in schools are not just for the wealth and healthy environment of school and teachers but also to the students because it it taught them lessons on being neat and.

✓ Yes, because setting rules in schools is not just for the well-being and healthy environment of the school and teachers but also for the students because it teaches them lessons on being neat.

The subject 'setting rules' is singular, so the verb should be 'is' not 'are'. Also, 'wealth' is incorrect in this context; 'well-being' or 'welfare' is appropriate. 'It it taught' is incorrect; it should be 'it teaches' to match present tense and subject. 'To the students' should be 'for the students' to use correct preposition.

× Yes, I did have a lot of teachers that did their job very well and became my role model and they shaped me on what I am today, right now, and they become my support system and motivation.

✓ Yes, I had a lot of teachers who did their job very well and became my role models; they shaped me into what I am today, and they have become my support system and motivation.

The phrase 'did have' is unnecessarily emphatic; 'had' is sufficient. 'That' should be 'who' when referring to people. 'Role model' should be plural 'role models' because it refers to multiple teachers. 'Shaped me on' should be 'shaped me into' to use correct preposition. 'Become' should be 'have become' to indicate present perfect tense showing ongoing relevance.