Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve grammar by using correct plural forms and tenses. Make your answer more natural and concise by avoiding redundancy and organizing the list clearly. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes, there were many rules for students at my school. For example, we were not allowed to grow long hair, have tattoos, wear extra earrings, or dye our hair.

Gợi ý: Clarify your ideas and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect reasons logically. Also, use more precise vocabulary to express your opinion clearly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe students would benefit from more rules because they help maintain discipline and ensure a uniform appearance, which promotes a sense of equality among students.

Gợi ý: Use complete sentences with proper tense and subject-verb agreement. Provide specific examples or qualities of the teacher to enrich your answer and use linking words for coherence.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have had many teachers from high school to college who did their jobs very well. For instance, one of my teachers was very patient and knowledgeable, and their guidance has greatly influenced who I am today.

× Yes, there is a lot of rules for students when I was in our school.

✓ Yes, there are a lot of rules for students when I was in our school.

The phrase 'there is' is incorrect because 'rules' is plural. The correct form is 'there are' to agree with the plural noun 'rules'. This is a common issue with 'there be' constructions where the verb must agree in number with the subject.

× Like no more growing hairs, no more tattoos, no more additional earrings and no coloring of hair.

✓ Like no more growing hair, no more tattoos, no more additional earrings, and no coloring of hair.

The word 'hairs' is incorrect here because 'hair' is an uncountable noun when referring to hair collectively. Using 'hairs' implies individual strands, which is not the intended meaning. Also, adding a comma before 'and' improves clarity.

× Yes, students would benefit more from more rules because it is for their own wealth and appearances because these rules are in place to maintain and meet and uniform appearance among all of these students.

✓ Yes, students would benefit more from more rules because they are for their own welfare and appearance, as these rules are in place to maintain a uniform appearance among all of the students.

The pronoun 'it' incorrectly refers to 'rules' which is plural, so 'they' should be used. Also, 'wealth' is incorrect in this context; the correct word is 'welfare'. The phrase 'meet and uniform appearance' is incorrect; it should be 'maintain a uniform appearance'. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Yes I do, had a lot of teacher way back from high school down to college and they shaped me on what I am today because I still carry their shared knowledge to me.

✓ Yes, I do. I had a lot of teachers way back from high school down to college, and they shaped me into what I am today because I still carry the knowledge they shared with me.

The original sentence lacks the subject 'I' before 'had', making it incomplete. 'Teacher' should be plural 'teachers' to match 'a lot of'. The phrase 'shaped me on what I am today' is incorrect; it should be 'shaped me into what I am today'. Also, 'their shared knowledge to me' is awkward; 'the knowledge they shared with me' is clearer and grammatically correct.