Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答は質問に直接答えていますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現があります。例えば、「neither skirt」は誤用で、「nor skirts」が正しいです。また、理由の説明が少し不明瞭で、より具体的に説明すると良いでしょう。文を簡潔にし、接続詞を使って論理的に繋げる練習をしてください。

Ví dụ: Yes, there are several rules at my school, such as the dress code for PE. For example, students are not allowed to wear jeans or skirts during PE classes because these clothes can restrict movement and make it difficult to exercise properly.

Gợi ý: 回答が長くなりすぎて冗長であり、文法的な誤りもあります。例えば、「start breaking rules」や「they all will start breaking the rules」の繰り返しは避けましょう。また、最後の「And yeah」は不自然です。もっと簡潔に、理由を明確に述べ、接続詞を使って論理的に繋げることを意識してください。

Ví dụ: I don't think more rules would help because students might feel overwhelmed and become tired of following them. As a result, they may start ignoring the rules, which could lead to more problems.

Gợi ý: 回答は質問に答えていますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現があります。例えば、「which is our Spanish teacher」ではなく「who is our Spanish teacher」が正しいです。また、「I think the reliance」は意味が不明瞭です。より明確で自然な表現を使い、接続詞で文を繋げてください。

Ví dụ: Yes, I have a teacher named Miss Lozano who is our current Spanish teacher. She teaches very well and is also very reliable, so everyone trusts her, and she trusts us in return.

× Yes, there are various rules such as PE outfit rules which you cannot use jeans neither skirt.

✓ Yes, there are various rules such as PE outfit rules where you cannot wear jeans or skirts.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'neither' in a negative context. 'Neither' is used in negative sentences to mean 'not either', but here it is combined with 'cannot' which creates a double negative. The correct conjunction to use is 'or' to list prohibited items. Also, 'use' should be 'wear' when referring to clothing.

× This is because if you have jeans or skirts on you then you can do sports properly.

✓ This is because if you wear jeans or skirts, then you cannot do sports properly.

The sentence contradicts itself by implying that wearing jeans or skirts allows proper sports activity, but logically, it should be the opposite. Also, 'have jeans or skirts on you' is awkward; 'wear' is the correct verb for clothing. The sentence should express that wearing jeans or skirts prevents proper sports activity.

× I don't think so, because when there are rules, some students get tired of it and start breaking rules, and then they all will start breaking the rules because they have too many rules that they just get tired of it.

✓ I don't think so, because when there are rules, some students get tired of them and start breaking the rules, and then they all will start breaking the rules because there are too many rules that they just get tired of them.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrectly used to refer to 'rules', which is plural. The correct pronoun should be 'them' to agree in number with 'rules'. Also, 'breaking rules' should be 'breaking the rules' for specificity.

× Yes, there is one teacher called Miss Lozano, which is our Spanish teacher right now and she teaches us well, but also she is very reliable.

✓ Yes, there is one teacher called Miss Lozano, who is our Spanish teacher right now, and she teaches us well, and she is also very reliable.

The relative pronoun 'which' is incorrectly used for a person; 'who' should be used instead. Also, the conjunctions are adjusted for better flow and clarity.

× So everyone trusts her and she trusts us, I think the reliance.

✓ So everyone trusts her and she trusts us; I think there is mutual trust.

The phrase 'I think the reliance' is awkward and incorrect. 'Reliance' is a noun that does not fit here without an article or proper context. The sentence is better expressed as 'I think there is mutual trust' to convey the intended meaning clearly.