Part 1
Giám khảo
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Thí sinh
Yes, umm, there are some rules for students in our school. Uh, for example, students should wear uniforms in the school and to keep the equity and the, uh, keep the same and uh, they can't, they are not allowed to.
Giám khảo
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Thí sinh
I don't think so. If there are too many rules for students, they may feel very limited and feel feel feel uncomfortable for when study at the school. So I I don't think it's a good choice for.
Giám khảo
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
Thí sinh
Yes, uh, I do have a teacher is quite responsible for his job. Uh, he's a math teacher and uh, he always let us do more practice in math questions and answer our questions very patiently.
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在较多的语气词和重复,影响流畅性。建议减少填充词,回答更简洁自然,同时补充具体细节使内容更丰富。
Ví dụ: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For instance, all students must wear uniforms to promote equality and discipline. Additionally, students are not allowed to use mobile phones during class to avoid distractions.
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中有重复和语法错误,表达不够清晰。建议注意语句完整性,避免重复,并用连接词使表达更连贯。
Ví dụ: I don't think having more rules would benefit students. Too many rules can make students feel restricted and uncomfortable, which might affect their learning experience negatively.
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和语气词较多,建议减少填充词,注意时态和主谓一致,同时丰富细节使回答更具体。
Ví dụ: Yes, I have a very responsible math teacher. He always encourages us to practice more math problems and patiently answers all our questions, which helps me improve a lot.
× they may feel very limited and feel feel feel uncomfortable for when study at the school.
✓ they may feel very limited and feel uncomfortable when studying at the school.
这里的动词短语需要使用动名词形式,表示正在进行的动作或状态。原句中缺少动名词形式,导致语法错误。应将 'study' 改为 'studying'。
× I do have a teacher is quite responsible for his job.
✓ I do have a teacher who is quite responsible for his job.
原句缺少关系代词 'who',导致句子结构不完整。需要添加 'who' 来引导定语从句,修饰 'teacher'。