Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 답변이 자연스럽지 않고 중복된 단어가 있습니다. 문장을 더 명확하고 간결하게 만들고, 이유를 구체적으로 설명하는 것이 좋습니다.

Ví dụ: Yes, there are several common rules in Korean schools. For example, students must wear uniforms. Although I find some rules unnecessary, schools still enforce them to maintain discipline.

Gợi ý: 답변이 주제에 직접적으로 연결되어 있으나, 연결어를 사용하여 문장 간 논리적 흐름을 개선하고 구체적인 예시를 추가하면 좋겠습니다.

Ví dụ: I believe that having more rules can help students become responsible adults. For instance, rules teach them time management and self-discipline, which are essential skills for life.

Gợi ý: 답변에 중복과 발음 오류가 있으며, 문장을 더 자연스럽고 명확하게 구성하는 연습이 필요합니다. 구체적인 예시를 들어 설명하면 좋습니다.

Ví dụ: Yes, my first English teacher, Dimitri Rosopoulos, was excellent. He always listened to us carefully and encouraged us to speak confidently. Thanks to him, my speaking skills improved a lot.

× There are some common rules for every every school in Korea.

✓ There are some common rules for every school in Korea.

The word 'every' is used with singular nouns, so 'every school' is correct, not 'every every school'. The repetition is redundant and incorrect.

× I think it's quite useless rules but but the schools are still maintaining it.

✓ I think they're quite useless rules but the schools are still maintaining them.

The subject 'rules' is plural, so the pronouns and verbs referring to it must also be plural. 'It's' (it is) should be 'they're' (they are), and 'it' should be 'them' to agree with the plural noun 'rules'.

× he he lead us to speak very well.

✓ he led us to speak very well.

The past tense of 'lead' is 'led', not 'lead'. Using 'lead' here is incorrect; the correct past tense form should be used to indicate a completed action in the past.