Part 1
Giám khảo
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Thí sinh
Yes, I am a university student, so in my school a lot of things rules. For example in the classes I don't speak with my friends, we can listen to teacher.
Giám khảo
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think rule good rules. It helps me good happiness in my daily life. For example, in my school in classes we can don't speak.
Giám khảo
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
Thí sinh
Yes, in my school a lot of teachers is very job very well. For example my music teacher is very good, it helps me reduce pressure and build confidence.
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 你的回答中语法错误较多,表达不够自然,且句子结构不完整。建议注意主谓一致,使用完整句子,并且避免重复表达。可以尝试用更清晰的句子描述学校的规则。
Ví dụ: Yes, there are many rules at my university. For example, during classes, students are not allowed to talk to their friends so that everyone can focus on the teacher.
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法和表达不清晰,且内容重复。建议用完整句子表达观点,并且提供具体理由或例子来支持你的看法。
Ví dụ: Yes, I believe having more rules can help students maintain discipline and create a better learning environment. For instance, rules about not speaking during class help us concentrate better.
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误,句子不够连贯。建议使用正确的时态和句子结构,并且用连接词使表达更流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, many teachers at my school do their jobs very well. For example, my music teacher helps me reduce stress and build my confidence through engaging lessons.
× Yes, I am a university student, so in my school a lot of things rules.
✓ Yes, I am a university student, so in my school there are a lot of rules.
原句中“a lot of things rules”结构不正确,应该使用“there are a lot of rules”来表达“有很多规则”,这里涉及复数名词和存在句型的使用。
× For example in the classes I don't speak with my friends, we can listen to teacher.
✓ For example, in the classes I don't speak with my friends; we can listen to the teacher.
原句中缺少逗号分隔句子,且“listen to teacher”缺少定冠词“the”,正确表达应为“listen to the teacher”。
× Yes, I think rule good rules.
✓ Yes, I think good rules are important.
原句“rule good rules”语序和单复数使用错误,应调整为“good rules are important”以表达正确意思。
× It helps me good happiness in my daily life.
✓ It helps me have good happiness in my daily life.
原句中“helps me good happiness”缺少动词,应该使用“helps me have good happiness”来表达“帮助我获得幸福”。
× For example, in my school in classes we can don't speak.
✓ For example, in my school, in classes we cannot speak.
原句“we can don't speak”语法错误,情态动词后不能直接加否定词“don't”,应改为“cannot speak”。
× Yes, in my school a lot of teachers is very job very well.
✓ Yes, in my school a lot of teachers do their job very well.
原句中“a lot of teachers is”主谓不一致,复数主语应搭配复数动词“do”,且“very job very well”表达不正确,应改为“do their job very well”。
× For example my music teacher is very good, it helps me reduce pressure and build confidence.
✓ For example, my music teacher is very good; he helps me reduce pressure and build confidence.
原句中缺少主语连接第二句,应使用代词“he”指代老师,且句子间应使用分号或句号分开。