Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. To improve, try to use correct sentence structures and avoid redundancy. For example, say "We must wear uniforms and are not allowed to bring mobile phones to school." Also, keep your answer concise and natural.

Ví dụ: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For instance, students must wear uniforms and are not allowed to bring mobile phones to school.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but repetitive and lacks linking words. To improve, use linking words like "because" and "so" properly, and avoid repeating the same idea. For example, "Yes, I think more rules would help students develop good habits and improve their learning skills because they encourage discipline."

Ví dụ: Yes, I think more rules would help students develop good habits and improve their learning skills because they encourage discipline.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. To improve, use correct tenses and clearer expressions. Also, provide more specific details about the teacher's qualities. For example, "Yes, I have a university teacher who is very kind and always creates a positive atmosphere in class."

Ví dụ: Yes, I have a university teacher who is very kind and always creates a positive atmosphere in class.

× For example in the school we must wear uniform and do not allow bring mobile phone in the school.

✓ For example, at school we must wear a uniform and are not allowed to bring mobile phones to school.

The definite article 'the' is incorrectly used before 'school' when referring to the general place. Also, 'wear uniform' needs an article 'a' before 'uniform'. The phrase 'do not allow bring mobile phone' is grammatically incorrect; it should be 'are not allowed to bring mobile phones'. Additionally, 'mobile phone' should be plural as it refers to any mobile phones students might bring. The preposition 'in the school' is better replaced with 'to school' to indicate bringing something to the location.

× For example in the school we must wear uniform and do not allow bring mobile phone in the school.

✓ For example, at school we must wear a uniform and are not allowed to bring mobile phones to school.

The modal verb 'must' is correctly used for obligation, but the phrase 'do not allow bring' is incorrect. The correct passive modal construction is 'are not allowed to bring'. This properly expresses prohibition.

× Yes, I suppose students would benefit from rules because rules can maintain a good habit and improve students learning skills because students must obey.

✓ Yes, I suppose students would benefit from rules because rules can help maintain good habits and improve students' learning skills because students must obey them.

The phrase 'maintain a good habit' should be plural 'good habits' as habits are usually plural. Also, 'students learning skills' needs a possessive apostrophe to become 'students' learning skills'. The sentence also benefits from adding 'help' to clarify the function of rules. Finally, 'students must obey' is incomplete; adding 'them' clarifies that students must obey the rules.

× Yes, I had a teacher who does work in the university.

✓ Yes, I have a teacher who works at the university.

The use of 'had' (past tense) conflicts with the present tense 'does work'. Since the teacher is currently working at the university, 'have' (present tense) is appropriate. Also, 'does work' should be 'works' to agree with the third person singular subject. The preposition 'in the university' is better as 'at the university' to indicate place of work.

× Yes, I had a teacher who does work in the university.

✓ Yes, I have a teacher who works at the university.

The definite article 'the' before 'university' is unnecessary when referring to the institution generally. The preposition 'at' is more appropriate than 'in' when referring to someone's workplace.

× He is very nice to me and he classes up very positive.

✓ He is very nice to me and his classes are very positive.

The phrase 'he classes up very positive' is ungrammatical. It likely intends to say 'his classes are very positive'. 'Classes' is a noun, so it needs a verb like 'are'. 'Very positive' is an adjective phrase describing 'classes'. The original sentence misuses 'classes' as a verb and 'up' is unnecessary.