Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question but lacks clarity and contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to organize your response with a clear topic sentence, use correct grammar, and avoid vague phrases like 'and like'. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes, my high school has several rules that students must follow. For example, we have a dress code requiring all students to wear uniforms. Additionally, girls are not allowed to wear makeup, and boys must keep their beards trimmed. These rules help maintain discipline and a focused learning environment.

Gợi ý: Your answer presents a clear opinion but is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. To improve, express your ideas more clearly, use linking words to connect your points, and avoid awkward phrasing. Also, try to provide specific reasons or examples to support your opinion.

Ví dụ: I believe schools should have fewer but more meaningful rules that focus on important aspects of education. Having too many rules might make the school feel strict and limit students' freedom, which could negatively affect their creativity and motivation.

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear and well-structured with relevant supporting details. To improve further, try to use more varied vocabulary and linking words to enhance coherence. Also, consider adding a specific example of how the teacher motivated you.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a teacher who performed his job exceptionally well. He set clear guidelines while encouraging us to be creative, which made me feel motivated and confident. For instance, he allowed us to choose our own project topics, fostering both independence and engagement.

× Like for example we have a desk code that we should all wear uniform we shouldn't.

✓ For example, we have a dress code that requires us all to wear uniforms.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'Like for example' and lacks proper conjunctions and punctuation, causing confusion. 'Like for example' is redundant; 'For example' is sufficient. Also, 'desk code' is a typo for 'dress code'. The sentence structure is unclear and run-on. The correction uses proper conjunctions and punctuation to clarify meaning.

× Girls shouldn't have make up on and boys shouldn't have long beards and like.

✓ Girls shouldn't wear makeup, and boys shouldn't have long beards.

The phrase 'have make up on' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'wear' with 'makeup' as a noun. Also, 'and like' is informal and vague, so it is omitted for clarity. The sentence is corrected for proper verb usage and clarity.

× I think schools should have less rules but more constructive ones than one that cover more general areas which are important for child education.

✓ I think schools should have fewer rules but more constructive ones that cover general areas important for child education.

'Less rules' is incorrect because 'rules' is countable; the correct quantifier is 'fewer'. Also, 'than one that cover' is grammatically incorrect; it should be 'that cover'. The sentence is rephrased for grammatical correctness and clarity.

× But not adding too much rules would cause a military like school and constrict freedom of students.

✓ But adding too many rules would create a military-like school and restrict students' freedom.

'Too much rules' is incorrect because 'rules' is countable; the correct quantifier is 'too many'. Also, 'cause a military like school' is awkward; 'create a military-like school' is better. 'Constrict freedom of students' is better expressed as 'restrict students' freedom'. The sentence is corrected for quantifier use and clarity.