Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Perbaiki penggunaan tata bahasa dan hindari pengulangan kata seperti 'uh'. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih jelas dan terstruktur dengan baik. Misalnya, mulai dengan kalimat topik yang langsung menjawab pertanyaan, lalu berikan contoh aturan secara spesifik dan gunakan kata penghubung untuk kelancaran.

Ví dụ: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, all students must wear a uniform every day. Additionally, students are not allowed to be late on weekends. These rules help maintain discipline and order in the school.

Gợi ý: Perbaiki struktur kalimat agar lebih jelas dan gunakan kosakata yang tepat. Hindari pengulangan kata dan tambahkan kata penghubung untuk membuat jawaban lebih koheren. Jelaskan pendapat dengan alasan yang spesifik.

Ví dụ: I believe it depends on the type of rules implemented by the school. However, stricter rules might limit students' creativity and freedom to express themselves, which could be detrimental to their development.

Gợi ý: Jawaban kurang jelas dan terlalu singkat. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih terstruktur dengan kalimat topik dan penjelasan yang mendukung. Hindari kalimat negatif yang terlalu umum dan berikan alasan spesifik serta perasaan pribadi.

Ví dụ: I don't have a specific teacher who stands out as excellent because I faced challenges in all my schools. However, I am grateful to all my teachers because their guidance helped me become stronger and more resilient.

× Yes, of course there are rules for the student.

✓ Yes, of course there are rules for the students.

The word 'student' should be plural 'students' because it refers to all students in general, not just one. This is a singular and plural issue.

× Uh, back then when I was at school, uh, there were primary rules is we students have to wear a uniform, uh, for going to school.

✓ Back then when I was at school, the primary rule was that we students had to wear a uniform to go to school.

The original sentence has incorrect sentence structure and verb agreement. 'There were primary rules is' is incorrect; it should be 'the primary rule was that'. Also, 'have to wear' should be in past tense 'had to wear' to match the past time frame. 'For going to school' should be 'to go to school' for correct infinitive usage.

× Another example of rules is we don't uh, weekend late at all.

✓ Another example of the rules is that we don't stay out late on weekends at all.

The phrase 'weekend late' is incorrect. It should be 'stay out late on weekends'. Also, 'rules' is plural, so 'another example of rules' should be 'another example of the rules'. This is an incorrect use of quantifiers and sentence structure issue.

× I think it depends on the rules that applied by the school, but actually a more tight the tighter the rules will will restrict students from being creative, you know?

✓ I think it depends on the rules that are applied by the school, but actually, the tighter the rules are, the more they will restrict students from being creative, you know?

The phrase 'a more tight the tighter the rules' is incorrect. It should be 'the tighter the rules are'. Also, 'rules that applied by the school' needs the verb 'are' to be correct. This is an incorrect use of adjectives and sentence structure issue.

× No, not really because my high school was bad, my junior high school was bad, so do my elementary school but I still thankful for them because they make me stronger at the end.

✓ No, not really because my high school was bad, my junior high school was bad, and so was my elementary school, but I am still thankful for them because they made me stronger in the end.

The phrase 'so do my elementary school' is incorrect; it should be 'and so was my elementary school' to maintain past tense and correct conjunction. Also, 'I still thankful' should be 'I am still thankful'. 'They make me stronger at the end' should be 'they made me stronger in the end' to match past tense. This involves incorrect use of pronouns, verb tense, and conjunctions.