Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer has many fillers and some unclear phrases, which affect the natural flow and clarity. Try to avoid hesitation sounds like 'uh' and 'you know'. Also, your answer is a bit incomplete and lacks specific details. Aim to give a clear topic sentence followed by specific examples, and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, students must wear uniforms every day and arrive on time. If someone breaks the rules, they may face serious consequences like suspension. These rules help maintain discipline and create a good learning environment.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains many hesitations, which makes it hard to understand your opinion. Try to state your opinion clearly at the beginning, then support it with reasons or examples. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Ví dụ: In my opinion, adding more rules would not benefit students. This is because too many rules can make students feel restricted and less motivated. Instead, focusing on important rules that promote respect and safety is better.

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally relevant but contains some hesitations and informal phrases like 'you know'. Try to organize your answer with a clear topic sentence, followed by specific supporting details. Avoid filler words and aim for more precise vocabulary.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a teacher named Mr. Sadie who taught me three months ago. He was very kind and hardworking, always willing to help students. I often asked him for advice because he was supportive and knowledgeable.

× Yup, there are some rules, uh, in our schools.

✓ Yup, there are some rules, uh, in our school.

The student refers to 'our school' as a singular entity, so 'schools' should be singular to match the context.

× So if we don't actually, uh, listen to them and do them, uh, we fired from school.

✓ So if we don't actually, uh, listen to them and do them, uh, we will be fired from school.

The sentence talks about a consequence in the future, so the modal verb 'will' plus passive voice 'be fired' is needed to express this correctly.

× And my point of view, umm, in our country, it's not actually, you know, they forced student to do them and they're not necessarily at, at all, uh, in many countries.

✓ In my point of view, umm, in our country, it's not actually, you know, that they force students to do them and they're not necessarily so at all, uh, in many countries.

The phrase 'And my point of view' is incorrect; it should be 'In my point of view'. Also, 'forced student' should be 'force students' to agree in number and tense. The phrase 'not necessarily at, at all' is awkward and corrected to 'not necessarily so at all' for clarity.

× Yeah, when I studied for aisles about three months ago, I had a teacher, Mr. Sadie, you know, he was very kind and I, and he's a good example by being hardworking and supportive.

✓ Yeah, when I studied for IELTS about three months ago, I had a teacher, Mr. Sadie, you know, he was very kind and he was a good example by being hardworking and supportive.

The phrase 'studied for aisles' is a mispronunciation or misspelling of 'IELTS'. Also, 'he's a good example' should be in past tense 'he was a good example' to maintain tense consistency with the past event.