Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. To improve, use correct verb tenses and clearer sentence structures. Also, avoid redundancy and be more specific about the rules. For example, instead of 'when clock takes 8:00 and 1:00', say 'by 8:00 AM and 1:00 PM'.

Ví dụ: Yes, there were several rules at my school. For example, all students had to be in class by 8:00 AM and 1:00 PM. Additionally, everyone was expected to maintain a neat and clean appearance.

Gợi ý: Your answer expresses your opinion but is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. To improve, organise your ideas clearly, use linking words, and correct grammar. For example, start with your opinion, then explain your reasons with linking phrases like 'because' or 'as'.

Ví dụ: I don't think students would benefit from having more rules because too many restrictions can limit their freedom to think independently. Therefore, it's better to have fewer rules that encourage free thought and creativity.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but could be more concise and better structured. Avoid repetition and improve sentence flow by using linking words. Also, correct grammar and word choice, for example, 'teacher of business statistics' should be 'business statistics teacher'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have a business statistics teacher at university who explains concepts much more clearly than others. He uses practical examples, which help me understand the material better.

× For instance, there was a rule that everyone should be in a class when clock takes 8:00 and 1:00.

✓ For instance, there was a rule that everyone should be in class when the clock strikes 8:00 and 1:00.

The phrase 'in a class' is incorrect here; it should be 'in class' as a general state. Also, 'clock takes' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'the clock strikes' to indicate time. The definite article 'the' is needed before 'clock' because it refers to a specific clock.

× More rule was everyone should be neat and clean.

✓ Another rule was that everyone should be neat and clean.

'More rule' is incorrect because 'rule' is singular and 'more' is used with plural nouns. The correct phrase is 'Another rule' to indicate an additional single rule. Also, adding 'that' improves sentence clarity.

× I think quite the opposite because if the students are supposed to follow many rules then it it is we are caging them they should be having a free thoughts and some less limitation in terms of rules.

✓ I think quite the opposite because if students are supposed to follow many rules, then it is like we are caging them; they should have free thoughts and fewer limitations in terms of rules.

The original sentence has repetition ('it it'), incorrect pronoun use ('we are caging them' is awkward), and incorrect quantifier use ('a free thoughts' and 'some less limitation'). The corrected sentence removes repetition, clarifies pronouns, uses 'have' instead of 'be having', and corrects quantifiers to 'free thoughts' and 'fewer limitations'. Punctuation is added for clarity.

× I'm currently studying in university.

✓ I'm currently studying at university.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect with 'university' in this context; the correct preposition is 'at' to indicate attendance at an institution.

× There's one teacher of business statistics who makes me understand so much better than the other teacher of the similar courses who are offering the same services.

✓ There's one teacher of business statistics who helps me understand much better than the other teachers of similar courses who offer the same services.

'The other teacher' should be plural 'other teachers' to match 'similar courses' and 'who are offering' should be 'who offer' for subject-verb agreement. Also, 'makes me understand so much better' is better expressed as 'helps me understand much better' for naturalness.