Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer needs to be clearer and more structured. Start with a direct response, then add specific details using linking words. Avoid repetition and grammatical errors to make your answer more natural and effective.

Ví dụ: Yes, there are several rules for students at my school. For example, wearing a uniform is compulsory, students must maintain discipline, and using phones during school hours is not allowed.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and repetitive. Try to give a clear opinion first, then explain with specific reasons using linking words. This will make your answer more coherent and effective.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe students would benefit from having more rules because following rules helps them focus better on their studies and encourages creativity in their work.

Gợi ý: Your answer is confusing and lacks clarity. Provide a clear topic sentence, then support it with specific examples using linking words. Avoid repetition and grammatical mistakes to improve naturalness and effectiveness.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have a teacher who does his job very well. For instance, he gives us meaningful assignments and pays close attention to each student's progress in studies.

× Yes, the rule the the rules for the students at school such as wearing compulsory, wearing uniform as well as stay in discipline and also not using phone during school time.

✓ Yes, the rules for the students at school include compulsory wearing of uniform, maintaining discipline, and not using phones during school time.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'the rule the the rules' which is redundant and confusing. Also, 'wearing compulsory' is incorrect; it should be 'compulsory wearing of uniform'. The sentence structure is improved by listing the rules clearly. Use of quantifiers like 'the' should be precise to avoid redundancy.

× Yes, the rule the the rules for the students at school such as wearing compulsory, wearing uniform as well as stay in discipline and also not using phone during school time.

✓ Yes, the rules for the students at school include compulsory wearing of uniform, maintaining discipline, and not using phones during school time.

The phrase 'stay in discipline' is incorrect; the correct form is 'maintaining discipline' or 'staying disciplined'. The verb form after 'as well as' should be consistent and correct. Using the gerund form '-ing' after prepositions is necessary here.

× Yes, yes for benefit would benefit more for more rules because for the rule they are, they are they are obey the rules.

✓ Yes, students would benefit more from having more rules because if they obey the rules,

The phrase 'for benefit would benefit more for more rules' is awkward and incorrect. The quantifier 'more' should be used properly with 'benefit' and 'rules'. Also, 'for the rule they are' is unclear and redundant. The sentence needs restructuring for clarity and correct quantifier use.

× Yes, yes for benefit would benefit more for more rules because for the rule they are, they are they are obey the rules.

✓ Yes, students would benefit more from having more rules because if they obey the rules,

The phrase 'they are obey the rules' is grammatically incorrect. The verb 'obey' should be in the base form after 'they are' only if used with a present participle, e.g., 'they are obeying'. Here, it should be 'if they obey the rules' to express a conditional statement correctly.

× They can focus more in on a study as well as creating different things.

✓ They can focus more on their studies as well as create different things.

The phrase 'focus more in on a study' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'on' and 'study' should be plural or possessive as 'studies' or 'their studies'. Also, 'creating' should be parallel with 'focus' and thus changed to 'create'. The sentence structure needs correction for parallelism and correct preposition use.

× Yes, the teachers who does this or have work is very well like they are doing assignments and also they are concentrate on more concentrate on who who students are like like in the studies and concentrate.

✓ Yes, the teachers who do their work very well, like doing assignments, and also concentrate more on the students, especially in their studies.

The original sentence has subject-verb agreement errors: 'teachers who does' should be 'teachers who do'. Also, 'have work is very well' is incorrect; it should be 'do their work very well'. The sentence is also repetitive and unclear, so restructuring improves clarity and grammar.