Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer covers the main points but is a bit repetitive and slightly unclear towards the end. Try to avoid repeating words like 'disciplined' and make your sentences more concise and natural. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For instance, students must arrive on time, wear uniforms every day, respect their teachers, and be polite to one another. These rules help maintain a respectful and disciplined learning environment.

Gợi ý: Your answer has good ideas but the grammar and sentence structure need improvement for clarity. Avoid incomplete sentences and ensure subject-verb agreement. Use linking words to express contrast clearly.

Ví dụ: I believe that having a reasonable amount of discipline benefits students. However, too many strict rules that limit their freedom and creativity can be harmful. Therefore, rules should balance discipline with allowing students to explore and express themselves.

Gợi ý: Your answer is heartfelt and relevant but contains some grammatical errors and repetitions. Try to avoid repeating words like 'teacher' and 'who'. Also, combine sentences using linking words to improve flow and coherence.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a high school teacher who did her job exceptionally well. She was one of our favourite teachers because she always supported us, understood our needs, and helped us develop our potential. Thanks to her guidance, I gained confidence and improved my learning skills.

× The one of them would be to report to school on time, to wear uniforms daily, to respect their teachers and to be polite to each other and to maintain a respectful, disciplined and disciplined of learning.

✓ One of them would be to report to school on time, to wear uniforms daily, to respect their teachers, to be polite to each other, and to maintain a respectful and disciplined learning environment.

The phrase 'The one of them' is incorrect; it should be 'One of them' because 'one' is singular and does not require the definite article 'the'. Also, 'disciplined of learning' is incorrect; it should be 'disciplined learning environment' to convey the intended meaning clearly. Additionally, the list items need proper conjunctions and commas for clarity.

× I do believe that a good amount of discipline would be beneficial to my students, but an autocratic disciplines or rules where students has no liberty to explore their freedom and the creativity that would be debilitating for the students.

✓ I do believe that a good amount of discipline would be beneficial to my students, but autocratic discipline or rules where students have no liberty to explore their freedom and creativity would be debilitating for the students.

The word 'disciplines' should be singular 'discipline' because it refers to the concept in general. Also, 'students has' is incorrect; it should be 'students have' to agree in number with the plural subject 'students'. The phrase 'the creativity' should be 'creativity' without 'the' as it is an uncountable noun here.

× In fact. So a good amount that does not restrain student.

✓ In fact, a good amount of discipline that does not restrain students is necessary.

The original sentences are fragments and lack proper structure. 'In fact.' is a sentence fragment and should be connected to the following sentence. Also, 'student' should be plural 'students' to match the context. The sentence needs a verb to be complete.

× Yes, I had a teacher in my high school who did her job absolutely well.

✓ Yes, I had a teacher in my high school who did her job absolutely well.

This sentence is correct in past tense and needs no correction.

× She was one of our favorite teacher in the school.

✓ She was one of our favorite teachers in the school.

'Teacher' should be plural 'teachers' because 'one of' is followed by a plural noun to indicate one among many.

× She was the teacher who who would always be there for us.

✓ She was the teacher who would always be there for us.

The word 'who' is repeated twice; one 'who' should be removed to correct the sentence.

× She understood our needs and guided us in exploring our potentials.

✓ She understood our needs and guided us in exploring our potential.

'Potentials' is incorrect here; 'potential' is an uncountable noun referring to the capacity to develop, so it should be singular.

× And she was also one of the reason why I built up my confidence and skills in learning.

✓ And she was also one of the reasons why I built up my confidence and skills in learning.

'Reason' should be plural 'reasons' because 'one of the' is followed by a plural noun to indicate one among many.