Part 1
Giám khảo
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Thí sinh
Yes, there are many rules for students at my school. For example, students must complete their homework on time and attend classes. These rules help students to manage their time effectively and develop good study habits.
Giám khảo
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Thí sinh
Yes, definitely. This will help the students manage their time effectively and develop good studies habits, and they can keep their discipline and organized.
Giám khảo
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
Thí sinh
Yes, I remember my English from primary school very well because her teaching method that suited the student perfectly so which made learning English were easy.
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Điểm: 85.0Gợi ý: 回答较为完整且结构清晰,但可以使用更多连接词使表达更流畅,同时避免重复表达“manage their time effectively”。
Ví dụ: Yes, there are many rules for students at my school. For instance, students must complete their homework on time and attend all classes. These regulations not only help students manage their time effectively but also encourage the development of good study habits.
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够自然,且内容重复。建议使用更准确的语法结构,丰富词汇,并避免重复。
Ví dụ: Yes, I believe that having more rules would benefit students by helping them manage their time better, maintain discipline, and stay organized throughout their studies.
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答语法错误较多,表达不够清晰。建议简化句子结构,使用正确的时态和主谓一致,并补充具体细节。
Ví dụ: Yes, I remember my primary school English teacher very well because her teaching methods suited the students perfectly, which made learning English much easier and more enjoyable.
× Yes, definitely. This will help the students manage their time effectively and develop good studies habits, and they can keep their discipline and organized.
✓ Yes, definitely. This will help the students manage their time effectively and develop good study habits, and they can keep their discipline and stay organized.
“studies habits”中的“studies”应为形容词“study”修饰“habits”,而不是复数名词形式。“keep their discipline and organized”中“organized”应与“keep”搭配使用动词形式“stay organized”,保持结构一致。
× Yes, I remember my English from primary school very well because her teaching method that suited the student perfectly so which made learning English were easy.
✓ Yes, I remember my English teacher from primary school very well because her teaching method suited the students perfectly, which made learning English easy.
原句结构混乱,缺少主语“teacher”,且“that suited the student perfectly so which made learning English were easy”结构不正确,应改为“her teaching method suited the students perfectly, which made learning English easy”以保证句子通顺且语法正确。