Part 1
Giám khảo
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Thí sinh
No there aren't many Rd. at my school it's more relaxed and we have more freedom to express ourselves. We focus on being responsibility instead of follow the street real rules.
Giám khảo
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Thí sinh
It depends on the student and how the roles are used. Some student do well with roles while others need more freedom. The role should be clear but not to strike strict so students can express themselves.
Giám khảo
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
Thí sinh
Yes my my math teacher is really good at teaching. She expands hard become into a simple way so everyone can understand. I think she's great at teaching her job.
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和拼写错误,如“Rd.”应为“rules”,“responsibility”应为“responsible”,且句子结构不够清晰。建议注意语法和拼写,使用完整且正确的句子表达观点。
Ví dụ: No, there aren't many rules at my school. It is quite relaxed, and we have more freedom to express ourselves. We focus on being responsible rather than strictly following many rules.
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中“roles”拼写错误为“roles”,且句子结构不够流畅。建议注意单复数形式和语法,使用连接词使表达更连贯。
Ví dụ: It depends on the student and how the rules are applied. Some students do well with clear rules, while others need more freedom. Therefore, rules should be clear but not too strict so that students can express themselves.
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在重复词汇“my my”,且表达不清晰,如“expands hard become”不符合英语表达习惯。建议使用更准确的词汇和句子结构,避免重复。
Ví dụ: Yes, my math teacher is really good at teaching. She explains difficult concepts in a simple way so that everyone can understand. I think she is excellent at her job.
× No there aren't many Rd. at my school it's more relaxed and we have more freedom to express ourselves.
✓ No, there aren't many rules at my school; it's more relaxed and we have more freedom to express ourselves.
这里的“Rd.”应为“rules”,表示“规则”,是复数形式。原句中使用了缩写且单数形式不正确,应该使用复数形式“rules”。
× We focus on being responsibility instead of follow the street real rules.
✓ We focus on being responsible instead of following the strict real rules.
“being responsibility”中“responsibility”是名词,应该用形容词“responsible”来修饰“being”。另外,“follow”应改为动名词“following”以符合介词“instead of”后的用法。
× It depends on the student and how the roles are used.
✓ It depends on the students and how the rules are used.
“student”应为复数“students”,因为这里指的是一般学生群体;“roles”应为“rules”,因为上下文讨论的是规则。
× Some student do well with roles while others need more freedom.
✓ Some students do well with rules while others need more freedom.
“student”应为复数“students”;“roles”应为“rules”,因为讨论的是规则。
× The role should be clear but not to strike strict so students can express themselves.
✓ The rules should be clear but not too strict so students can express themselves.
“to strike strict”是错误表达,应为“too strict”,表示“过于严格”;“role”应为复数“rules”,符合上下文。
× Yes my my math teacher is really good at teaching.
✓ Yes, my math teacher is really good at teaching.
“my my”重复,应去掉一个“my”。
× She expands hard become into a simple way so everyone can understand.
✓ She explains hard concepts in a simple way so everyone can understand.
“expands hard become”是错误表达,应为“explains hard concepts”,表示“解释难懂的概念”;“into a simple way”应改为“in a simple way”,表示“用简单的方式”。
× I think she's great at teaching her job.
✓ I think she's great at doing her job.
“teaching her job”表达不自然,应改为“doing her job”,表示“做好她的工作”。