Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 文法の誤りと不自然な表現が見られます。例えば、「we have we couldn't dye our hair」は意味が不明瞭で、「the lengths of the Scott is also regulated」も誤りです。正しい文法と語彙を使い、簡潔で明確な答えを心がけましょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, when I was a high school student, we were not allowed to dye our hair, and the length of our skirts was also regulated.

Gợi ý: 発音の誤り（"Rose"は"rules"の誤りと思われる）や文法の誤りがあり、意味が伝わりにくいです。また、答えが途中で終わっているため、意見を明確に述べ、理由や具体例を付け加えると良いでしょう。

Ví dụ: I think rules make the school environment consistent and clear. However, if there are too many rules, students may feel restricted and stressed, so a balance is important.

Gợi ý: 文法の誤りや繰り返し（"her her"）、文が途中で終わっている点が問題です。より自然で流暢な表現を使い、具体的な理由や例を加えて答えを完成させましょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, I had an English teacher who taught very effectively. Her classes were enjoyable because she used English efficiently and included many games to help us learn.

× Yes, when I was a high school student we have we couldn't dye our hair and the lengths of the Scott is also regulated.

✓ Yes, when I was a high school student, we couldn't dye our hair and the lengths of the skirt were also regulated.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. Since the context is about past rules, 'have' should be removed and 'is' should be changed to 'were' to maintain past tense consistency. Also, 'Scott' seems to be a typo for 'skirt'.

× Hmm, I think Rose makes the school umm consistent and clear. But by giving many rules, students have not much freedom and they might feel stressed. So I think many rules.

✓ Hmm, I think rules make the school umm consistent and clear. But by giving too many rules, students do not have much freedom and they might feel stressed. So I think too many rules are not good.

The word 'Rose' is likely a typo for 'rules'. 'Many rules' is used incorrectly without a quantifier like 'too' to express excess. Also, 'have not much freedom' should be 'do not have much freedom' for correct negation. The last sentence is incomplete and needs clarification.

× Yes, I had a teacher who teaches us English very well and her her classes were very enjoyable by using English with a efficient way and we did a lot of games and.

✓ Yes, I had a teacher who taught us English very well and her classes were very enjoyable because she used English in an efficient way and we played a lot of games.

The sentence mixes past and present tense; 'teaches' should be 'taught' to match past context. 'Her her' is a repetition error. 'By using English with a efficient way' is awkward and should be 'because she used English in an efficient way'. 'Did a lot of games' is incorrect; 'played a lot of games' is correct.