Shoes— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be direct and concise: start with a clear topic sentence (Yes, I do / No, I don't), state frequency using correct expressions (e.g. a few times a year), and give one specific reason. Use correct article usage and verb forms. Keep answer under 3–4 sentences and avoid redundant phrases.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes. I usually buy them a few times a year, mostly during sales because I can get good brands at lower prices. For example, I often wait for end-of-season discounts to replace worn-out pairs.

Gợi ý: Begin with a clear statement using correct tense (Yes, I have bought shoes online). Then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words (for example, so, because). Mention how you check reviews and why online shopping is convenient, using correct grammar and vocabulary.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have bought shoes online. I usually read customer reviews first because they help me judge quality and fit. Also, online stores offer more choices and convenient delivery, which saves me time.

Gợi ý: Answer with a specific amount or range and a clear reason. Use precise vocabulary (comfortable, fit) and avoid filler words. Structure: topic sentence with amount, then one supporting reason with linking word (because). Keep it short and coherent.

Ví dụ: I usually spend about $30–$60 on a pair of shoes because I prefer affordable, comfortable options that fit well for daily use. If it's for a special occasion, I might spend more.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear preference statement and give a specific reason using correct grammar and linking words. Mention an example or situation (e.g. long shifts at work) and avoid repetition. Use correct expressions (I stand a lot, they hurt my feet).

Ví dụ: I prefer comfortable shoes because I stand for long periods at work and fashionable heels would hurt my feet. For example, I choose cushioned sneakers that support my arches so I can be on my feet all day without pain.

× Yes, I love buying shoes but I only purchase it many times on a year because I think I prefer buying a shoes on a sales or many occasion of the year is so suitable.

✓ Yes, I love buying shoes but I only purchase them a few times a year because I prefer buying shoes during sales or on special occasions throughout the year.

Errors: 'it' refers to plural 'shoes' so use 'them' (pronoun agreement). 'many times on a year' is incorrect; use 'a few times a year' or 'many times a year'. 'a shoes' should be plural 'shoes'. 'on a sales' wrong article and number; use 'during sales' or 'on sale'. Suggestion: Ensure nouns and pronouns match in number and use correct expressions for frequency and occasions.

× Yes, I have ever bought the shoes online.

✓ Yes, I have bought shoes online.

'Have ever bought' is nonstandard in present perfect; use 'have bought' and place 'ever' in appropriate questions or negative contexts (e.g., 'Have you ever bought...?'). Also 'the shoes' is unnecessary; use 'shoes' for general experience.

× I always reading the recommend of customer in online.

✓ I always read customer reviews online.

Incorrect use of progressive 'reading' with a habitual action; use simple present 'read'. 'recommend of customer' is incorrect noun choice and possessive; use 'customer reviews'. Use 'online' adverb placement at end. Suggestion: Use simple present for habits and conventional collocations like 'read reviews'.

× It can give me many choice for myself to choose the brand and the shop I want to buy it and it's so convenient for me.

✓ It gives me many choices so I can choose the brand and the shop I want to buy from, and it's very convenient for me.

Use plural 'choices' for countable plural. 'Give' fits simple present for general truth. 'Buy it' is wrong; use 'buy from' to indicate the shop. 'many choice' and awkward phrase order corrected. Suggestion: Match noun number and use correct verb forms and prepositions with 'buy from'.

× I always reading the recommend of customer in online. It can give me many choice for myself to choose the brand and the shop I want to buy it and it's so convenient for me.

✓ I always read customer reviews online. They give me many choices so I can choose the brand and the shop I want to buy from, and it's very convenient for me.

Mixing tenses and pronouns; use simple present 'read' and 'give' for habitual/general facts. Replace 'it' with 'they' to refer to 'reviews'. Ensure pronoun agreement and consistent tense.

× I only spend a little money, uh, for buying the shoes because I think I just buy this purchase the shoes which are also convenient and suitable or comfortable in my feed, my food, so I only.

✓ I only spend a little money on buying shoes because I buy shoes that are convenient and comfortable for my feet.

Several plural/singular errors: 'a little money' is acceptable but phrasing 'for buying the shoes' should be 'on buying shoes'. 'this purchase the shoes' is redundant and ungrammatical. 'feed, my food' intended 'feet'. Correct plural 'feet'. Suggestion: Simplify structure and use correct body-part plural 'feet'.

× I only spend a little money, uh, for buying the shoes because I think I just buy this purchase the shoes which are also convenient and suitable or comfortable in my feed, my food, so I only.

✓ I only spend a little money on buying shoes because I buy shoes that are convenient and comfortable for my feet.

Use 'spend on' rather than 'spend for' when talking about money. Use 'comfortable for my feet' not 'in my feet/food'. Suggestion: Learn common verb-preposition collocations like 'spend on' and 'comfortable for'.

× I prefer comfortable shoes because uh, my shop is always standing on the shoes, so I always choose the comfortable shoes to don't bend my foot and it can for comfortable for me to work.

✓ I prefer comfortable shoes because I am usually standing at work, so I always choose comfortable shoes so they don't hurt my feet and they are comfortable for me to work in.

'my shop is always standing on the shoes' is incorrect meaning and grammar. Probably intended 'I am always standing at work'. Use 'don't' instead of 'to don't' and match subject 'they' with plural 'shoes' and plural verb 'don't hurt'. 'it can for comfortable' is ungrammatical; use 'they are comfortable for me to work in'. Suggestion: Keep subject-verb agreement, use correct infinitive/negative forms, and ensure pronouns agree with nouns.

× I prefer comfortable shoes because uh, my shop is always standing on the shoes, so I always choose the comfortable shoes to don't bend my foot and it can for comfortable for me to work. So I always just.

✓ I prefer comfortable shoes because I am usually standing at work, so I always choose comfortable shoes so they don't hurt my feet and they are comfortable for me to work in.

Pronoun errors: 'it' used for plural 'shoes' should be 'they'. 'my shop is always standing' uses wrong noun; speaker is 'I'. Also 'my foot' should be plural 'my feet' when referring generally. Suggestion: Ensure pronouns match antecedents in number and person and use correct nouns to reflect meaning.

× So I always just.

✓ So I always do.

Fragment: 'So I always just.' is incomplete and lacks a verb/complement. Replace with a complete clause like 'So I always do' or expand to 'So I always choose comfort.' Suggestion: Ensure every sentence has a subject and a finite verb and expresses a complete thought.