Library— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and lacks linking words. Try to use correct verb forms and connect your ideas smoothly. Also, avoid redundancy by combining similar points.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often go to the library because it enhances my knowledge and provides me with valuable experiences. Moreover, I love reading books as it is my favourite hobby.

Gợi ý: Your answer has good content but the sentence structure is a bit awkward and some phrases are unclear. Use linking words to connect ideas and clarify your points. Also, be specific about the types of books you read.

Ví dụ: I usually go to the library because I need a peaceful place to relax. I enjoy reading books, especially mysterious novels and funny comics. For example, I often read comics about celebrities, which I find very entertaining.

Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Use correct tenses and avoid repetition. Also, try to give a clear reason and link your ideas logically.

Ví dụ: No, I did not go to the library when I was a child because I loved playing cricket. Since I did not have any interest in reading books back then, I never had the opportunity to visit the library.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and lacks confidence. Avoid contradicting statements and try to express your opinion clearly. Use linking words to organise your ideas and be specific.

Ví dụ: I am not sure about the habits of Chinese children regarding libraries. However, I believe that children everywhere should visit libraries regularly to improve their knowledge, as it is very important for their education.

× Yes, I often go to library because it enhance my knowledge as well as I gain many experience from that.

✓ Yes, I often go to the library because it enhances my knowledge as well as I gain much experience from that.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific place known to both speaker and listener. Also, 'enhance' should be 'enhances' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. 'Many experience' is incorrect because 'experience' is an uncountable noun; 'much experience' is correct.

× Yes, I often go to library because it enhance my knowledge as well as I gain many experience from that.

✓ Yes, I often go to the library because it enhances my knowledge as well as I gain much experience from that.

The verb 'enhance' must be in the third person singular form 'enhances' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.

× Yes, I often go to library because it enhance my knowledge as well as I gain many experience from that.

✓ Yes, I often go to the library because it enhances my knowledge as well as I gain much experience from that.

'Experience' is an uncountable noun, so 'many' is incorrect. The correct quantifier is 'much'.

× Well, I need a peaceful place and I go to library.

✓ Well, I need a peaceful place and I go to the library.

'Library' is a specific place here, so it requires the definite article 'the'.

× I love to read books by which I feel relaxed and I have a great interest in mysterious and funny comics.

✓ I love to read books, which makes me feel relaxed, and I have a great interest in mysterious and funny comics.

The phrase 'by which' is incorrect here; 'which makes me feel relaxed' is the correct relative clause to express cause and effect.

× So I usually read comics and mysterious books of the celebrities in the library.

✓ So I usually read comics and mysterious books about celebrities in the library.

The phrase 'books of the celebrities' is awkward; 'books about celebrities' is more natural. Also, 'the library' is correct here as it refers to a specific place.

× No, I've never seen the library in my childhood as I love to play cricket.

✓ No, I never went to the library in my childhood as I loved to play cricket.

'I've never seen' is present perfect and not appropriate for a past time reference like 'in my childhood'. 'Never went' is the correct simple past tense. Also, 'love' should be 'loved' to maintain past tense consistency.

× Well I didn't have any hobbies related to reading books so I didn't get a chance in my childhood to go went to library.

✓ Well, I didn't have any hobbies related to reading books, so I didn't get a chance in my childhood to go to the library.

'Go went' is incorrect; only 'go' is needed after 'to'. Also, 'the library' requires the definite article. The sentence is in past tense, so 'didn't have' and 'didn't get' are correct.

× No, I don't have knowledge about China.

✓ No, I don't have knowledge about China.

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× I think they often go to library or not.

✓ I think they often go to the library or not.

'Library' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place.

× Well, I think all the children go to library to enhance their knowledge.

✓ Well, I think all the children go to the library to enhance their knowledge.

'Library' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place.

× According to me it's mandatory for all to go to library.

✓ According to me, it's mandatory for all to go to the library.

'Library' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place.