Library— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it is a bit lengthy and somewhat repetitive. Try to keep your response concise and avoid redundancy by combining similar ideas. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often go to the library on weekends because it's quiet and peaceful, which helps me focus on my studies and avoid distractions. Additionally, I find it a great place to learn new things through the books available.

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question but lacks clear structure and has some grammatical errors. Try to start with a topic sentence, then add supporting details using linking words. Also, be careful with sentence construction to improve clarity.

Ví dụ: In the library, I usually focus on completing my college assignments. Moreover, I use new books available there to enhance my learning and avoid distractions.

Gợi ý: Your answer contains filler words and some informal language which affects the natural flow. Try to avoid fillers like 'umm' and use more formal expressions. Also, improve sentence variety and clarity by restructuring your answer.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often went to the library as a child because my parents believed it would help me stay focused. They encouraged me to develop the habit early on, which I have continued into adulthood.

Gợi ý: Your answer is repetitive and lacks precise vocabulary. Avoid repeating the same phrase multiple times. Instead, use varied expressions and provide a clear reason to support your opinion. Also, try to be more confident in your statements.

Ví dụ: Yes, many Chinese children frequently visit the library because their parents encourage them from a young age, believing it benefits their learning and future development.

× It helps me focus onto my studies and keeps me away from all sorts of distraction.

✓ It helps me focus on my studies and keeps me away from all sorts of distractions.

The phrase 'focus onto' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'focus on'. Also, 'distraction' should be plural 'distractions' to match 'all sorts of', which implies multiple distractions.

× I usually try to focus in the library, it helps me be away from all sorts of distractions.

✓ I usually try to focus in the library; it helps me stay away from all sorts of distractions.

The phrase 'be away from' is awkward here; 'stay away from' is more appropriate. Also, the comma should be replaced with a semicolon or period to separate two independent clauses.

× I tend to complete my college work the assignments that I do and I take help of new books that are available in the library which helps me in learning.

✓ I tend to complete my college assignments and take help from new books available in the library, which helps me learn.

The original sentence is run-on and unclear. 'College work the assignments that I do' is redundant and awkward. 'Take help of' should be 'take help from'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and conciseness.

× Yes, I went to library very often as a kid because my parents are very keen on sending me to the library because umm, that way it's gonna help me stay more focused.

✓ Yes, I went to the library very often as a kid because my parents were very keen on sending me to the library since it would help me stay more focused.

The phrase 'went to library' is missing the definite article 'the'. Also, 'are' should be 'were' to match past tense. 'Because umm, that way it's gonna' is informal and awkward; 'since it would' is more appropriate.

× And umm, as a child, umm, they wanted me to be in the practice of going to library, so I continue it in future.

✓ And as a child, they wanted me to be in the practice of going to the library, so I continue it in the future.

Missing definite article 'the' before 'library'. Also, 'continue it in future' should be 'continue it in the future' for correct article usage.

× Yes, I guess Chinese kids do often go to the library because the parents are very well sorted and they encourage their children from a very young age to visit the library as it is helpful, as it's gonna be helpful, as it is going to be helpful for them in the future.

✓ Yes, I guess Chinese kids often go to the library because their parents are very well organized and encourage their children from a very young age to visit the library, as it is helpful and will be beneficial for them in the future.

'The parents' should be 'their parents' to indicate possession. 'Well sorted' is incorrect; 'well organized' is appropriate. The repetition of 'as it is helpful' is redundant and awkward; simplified for clarity and correctness.