Library— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 답변이 과거와 현재를 혼합하여 표현되어 혼란을 줄 수 있습니다. 현재 시제와 과거 시제를 명확히 구분하고, 문장을 간결하게 구성하는 연습이 필요합니다. 예를 들어, 'These days, I don't often go to the library, but I used to visit it frequently when I was in high school.'와 같이 표현할 수 있습니다.

Ví dụ: These days, I don't often go to the library, but I used to visit it frequently when I was in high school.

Gợi ý: 답변이 길고 중복된 표현이 많아 자연스럽지 않습니다. 핵심 내용을 중심으로 간결하게 말하고, 연결어를 사용해 문장을 매끄럽게 만드는 연습이 필요합니다. 예를 들어, 'I usually read my favorite series and do homework with my friends at the library.'처럼 표현할 수 있습니다.

Ví dụ: I usually read my favorite series and do homework with my friends at the library.

Gợi ý: 답변이 비교적 명확하지만, 'did so many things' 같은 모호한 표현 대신 구체적인 활동을 나열하는 것이 좋습니다. 또한, 연결어를 사용해 문장 간 흐름을 자연스럽게 만들어야 합니다.

Ví dụ: Yes, my parents allowed me to go to the library alone or with friends. There, I read books, met my friends, and completed my homework.

Gợi ý: 답변이 불확실하고 반복적인 표현이 많아 명확하지 않습니다. 자신의 의견을 분명히 하고, 이유나 예시를 덧붙여 구체적으로 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다. 예를 들어, 'I believe Chinese kids often go to the library just like Korean kids because both cultures value education.'라고 말할 수 있습니다.

Ví dụ: I believe Chinese kids often go to the library just like Korean kids because both cultures value education.

× No, these days I didn't go to the library, but I used to visit that place in my high school and I usually studied at the library when I was a child.

✓ No, these days I don't go to the library, but I used to visit that place in my high school and I usually studied at the library when I was a child.

The phrase 'these days' indicates the present time, so the past tense 'didn't go' is incorrect here. It should be present tense 'don't go' to match the time frame.

× When I was a child, I usually read my favorite books, series books and I studied at the library with my friends and I usually did my homework from high from school at those places.

✓ When I was a child, I usually read my favorite books, series books, and I studied at the library with my friends and I usually did my homework from high school at those places.

The phrase 'from high from school' is incorrect. It should be 'from high school'. Also, a comma is needed before 'and' to separate the list items properly.

× I usually did my homework from high from school at those places.

✓ I usually did my homework from high school at those places.

The phrase 'from high from school' contains an extra preposition 'from'. The correct phrase is 'from high school'.

× I did so many things at the library such as reading books, meeting my friends and doing my homework from school.

✓ I did so many things at the library such as reading books, meeting my friends, and doing my homework from school.

In a list, commas should separate items, including before 'and' in a series (Oxford comma) for clarity.

× I haven't thought about this question before but I tried to answer.

✓ I haven't thought about this question before, but I will try to answer.

The phrase 'haven't thought' is present perfect, indicating up to now, but 'tried' is past tense. To express intention now, 'will try' is more appropriate.

× I think Chinese kids also visited the library as well as Korean kids and I think those things they did at that place is the same with Korean kids.

✓ I think Chinese kids also visit the library as well as Korean kids, and I think the things they do at that place are the same as Korean kids.

The sentence mixes past tense 'visited' with present tense 'think'. Since the statement is general, present tense 'visit' is correct. Also, 'is' should be 'are' to agree with plural 'things', and 'the same with' should be 'the same as'.