Library— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains redundancy. Try to give a direct response first, then add specific details. Also, avoid filler words like "What?" and ensure grammatical accuracy, such as "I prefer to go to the library once a week."

Ví dụ: No, I don't go to the library often because I am usually busy. However, I try to visit the library once a week to read and study.

Gợi ý: Your answer has good content but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly, and choose correct vocabulary, for example, "quiet" instead of "quantile."

Ví dụ: Whenever I visit the library, I usually sit and read books that interest me. Moreover, the quiet environment always helps me feel refreshed.

Gợi ý: Your answer is informative but could be clearer and more concise. Use proper tense and avoid filler phrases like "but like." Also, organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details.

Ví dụ: No, I did not go to the library as a child because there were no libraries at my school or village. Instead, I read books at home and at school.

Gợi ý: Your answer is uncertain and contains hesitations and irrelevant information. Try to give a clear opinion or state that you are unsure without unnecessary fillers. Use linking words to organize your thoughts logically.

Ví dụ: I am not sure if Chinese kids often go to the library. However, since China is a developed country, I assume that libraries are available and children might visit them regularly.

× I prefer to go library once in a week.

✓ I prefer to go to the library once a week.

The preposition 'to' is required after the verb 'go' when indicating a destination. Also, 'once a week' is the correct expression for frequency, not 'once in a week'.

× the quantile environment of the library always rejuvenate me.

✓ the quiet environment of the library always rejuvenates me.

The word 'quantile' is incorrect here; the correct adjective is 'quiet' to describe the environment. Also, the verb 'rejuvenate' should be in the third person singular form 'rejuvenates' to agree with the singular subject 'environment'.

× No, when I was a kid I've never been to the library because at that time I was in my home country and there are no libraries in school and even in the village.

✓ No, when I was a kid I had never been to the library because at that time I was in my home country and there were no libraries in school or even in the village.

The past perfect tense 'had never been' is appropriate to indicate an action that did not happen before another past time. Also, 'there are' should be changed to 'there were' to maintain past tense consistency.

× But like I read books at my home or at school but I can't say it's in the library.

✓ But I read books at my home or at school, but I can't say it was in the library.

The phrase 'like I read' is informal and unclear; removing 'like' improves clarity. Also, 'it's' should be 'it was' to maintain past tense consistency. A comma before 'but' improves sentence structure.

× Actually, I don't know the lifestyle of the Chinese kids, but maybe they go to the library often because I hear from the Internet like China is the advanced company.

✓ Actually, I don't know the lifestyle of Chinese kids, but maybe they go to the library often because I heard from the Internet that China is an advanced country.

The phrase 'hear from the Internet' is better expressed as 'heard from the Internet' to match past tense. 'Like' should be replaced with 'that' to introduce a clause. 'Advanced company' is incorrect; the correct term is 'advanced country'.