Library— Part 1 Báo cáo
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Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you often go to the library?
Thí sinh
I don't often go to the library because I am busy with a bunch of things, but I love going to the library though because it is the place that holds like the knowledge and the things that I need. I will try to go more often to the library.
Giám khảo
What do you usually do in the library?
Thí sinh
I usually go to the library to read books. Of course I love to read some kinds of books like investigate comedies or like romantic books. It just I think it is interesting to me and I would love to read books.
Giám khảo
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Thí sinh
I don't actually remember when was my last time going to the library, but I think when I was a kid I used to go to the library because I love books since I was so small and the library have the books that are suitable for the children. And yeah, I go. I went to the library when I was a kid.
Giám khảo
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Thí sinh
I'm not a Chinese so I don't know about that, but I think they might love going to the library because it has books and some things that maybe children in any country in the world might lie.
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Part 1
Do you often go to the library?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài dòng và có một số từ không cần thiết như "like" và "though" lặp lại. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp hơn và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng hơn để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.
Ví dụ: I don't go to the library often because I am usually busy, but I enjoy visiting it since it has many resources I need. I plan to go more frequently in the future.
What do you usually do in the library?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như "investigate comedies" (có thể bạn muốn nói "detective comedies" hoặc "mystery comedies"). Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc rõ ràng hơn và tránh lặp từ.
Ví dụ: I usually read books in the library, especially detective comedies and romantic novels, because I find them very interesting.
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự mạch lạc và có lỗi ngữ pháp như "the library have" thay vì "the library has". Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, tránh lặp lại và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, rõ ràng hơn.
Ví dụ: I used to go to the library when I was a child because I loved books, and the library had many books suitable for children.
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Bạn nên tránh nói "I don't know" mà nên đưa ra ý kiến dựa trên suy nghĩ của mình. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như "might lie" thay vì "might like". Hãy sử dụng câu trả lời rõ ràng, có cấu trúc và từ vựng phù hợp.
Ví dụ: Although I am not Chinese, I believe many Chinese children enjoy going to the library because it offers a variety of books and resources that children everywhere appreciate.
Ngữ pháp
× I don't often go to the library because I am busy with a bunch of things, but I love going to the library though because it is the place that holds like the knowledge and the things that I need.
✓ I don't often go to the library because I am busy with a bunch of things, but I love going to the library because it is the place that holds the knowledge and the things that I need.
The word 'like' is incorrectly used here as a filler and should be removed to improve clarity and correctness.
× the library have the books that are suitable for the children.
✓ the library has the books that are suitable for children.
The subject 'library' is singular, so the verb should be 'has' instead of 'have'. Also, 'the children' is better as 'children' without 'the' in this context.
× I think they might love going to the library because it has books and some things that maybe children in any country in the world might lie.
✓ I think they might love going to the library because it has books and some things that maybe children in any country in the world might like.
The word 'lie' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'like' to express preference.
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