Library— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to answer directly and clearly, using past or present tense appropriately. Avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise, ideally within 5 sentences. For example, start with a clear topic sentence and then add a brief supporting detail.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often went to the library when I was in school. Recently, I visited the library to return my 12th-grade books and collect my transfer certificate.

Gợi ý: Your answer has some repetition and awkward phrasing. Try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and avoid repeating phrases. Also, use more precise vocabulary and correct grammar to make your answer clearer and more natural.

Ví dụ: I usually read novels related to current affairs in the library. Additionally, my school library had a newspaper stand where I often read newspapers to stay updated on the latest news.

Gợi ý: Your answer provides relevant details but is somewhat confusing due to repetition and unclear phrasing. Try to organize your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details, using linking words to improve coherence. Also, avoid repeating words and check grammar for clarity.

Ví dụ: Yes, when I was a kid, we had a scheduled time to visit the library once a week during primary school. On those days, we usually read picture storybooks, which were very enjoyable.

Gợi ý: Your answer lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors. Try to express uncertainty politely and provide a clear opinion or information. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid awkward phrasing. Also, be careful with word choice and sentence structure to make your answer more natural.

Ví dụ: I'm not entirely sure, but from what I've seen on social media, Chinese kids are quite familiar with libraries. They usually spend two to three sessions per week there to gain more information and stay updated.

× Let me recall, yes I do often go to libraries when I was in my school last time I go to library to return my 12th grade books to take my TC from my school.

✓ Let me recall, yes I often went to libraries when I was in school. The last time I went to the library was to return my 12th grade books and to take my TC from my school.

The sentence mixes present tense ('do often go') with past time references ('when I was in my school'). To maintain consistency, past tense should be used when referring to past events. Also, 'in my school' is better as 'in school' for natural phrasing. 'Last time I go' should be 'last time I went' to match past tense.

× Without any doubt, I go to the library to read books such as novels which are related to which are related to current affairs.

✓ Without any doubt, I go to the library to read books such as novels which are related to current affairs.

The phrase 'which are related to' is repeated unnecessarily, causing redundancy. Removing the repeated phrase improves clarity and correctness.

× But apart from that in my in my school there was a newspaper stand which on which I oftenly read in newspapers to know to make me updated.

✓ But apart from that, in my school there was a newspaper stand where I often read newspapers to keep myself updated.

The phrase 'which on which' is incorrect; 'where' is the correct relative pronoun for places. 'Oftenly' is not a correct adverb; 'often' should be used. 'Read in newspapers' is incorrect; it should be 'read newspapers'. 'To know to make me updated' is awkward; 'to keep myself updated' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× Yes, when when I was a kid there was a time to be timetable in my school when I was when I was in primary classes like 1 to one or two in the in week.

✓ Yes, when I was a kid, there was a timetable in my school when I was in primary classes like grades one or two during the week.

The sentence has repetition and awkward phrasing. 'Time to be timetable' is incorrect; it should be 'there was a timetable'. 'Like 1 to one or two' is unclear; 'grades one or two' is clearer. 'In the in week' should be 'during the week'.

× In one week we only get one chance to go to library and on that day we usually read storybooks with pictures.

✓ In one week, we only got one chance to go to the library, and on that day we usually read storybooks with pictures.

Since the context is past ('when I was a kid'), past tense 'got' should be used instead of 'get'. Also, 'go to library' should be 'go to the library' to include the definite article.

× They are really enjoyable for you.

✓ They were really enjoyable for us.

The sentence refers to past events, so past tense 'were' is appropriate. Also, 'for you' is incorrect as the speaker is talking about their own experience; 'for us' is correct.

× To be honest I'm not sure about it, but as I see as so little bit about it in on social media.

✓ To be honest, I'm not sure about it, but I have seen a little bit about it on social media.

'As I see as so little bit about it in on social media' is ungrammatical. The correct phrase is 'I have seen a little bit about it on social media'. 'On' is the correct preposition for social media.

× So Chinese kids are very familiar to libraries and they spend their two to three lectures in the week in the scheduled week to get more informative and up to date.

✓ So Chinese kids are very familiar with libraries and they spend two to three hours per week in scheduled sessions to get more information and stay up to date.

'Familiar to' should be 'familiar with'. 'Lectures' is likely incorrect here; 'hours' or 'sessions' is more appropriate. 'In the week in the scheduled week' is redundant; 'per week in scheduled sessions' is clearer. 'Get more informative' is incorrect; it should be 'get more information'.