Library— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to make your answer more concise and avoid redundancy. For example, instead of repeating 'anywhere and everywhere', you can say 'anytime and anywhere'. Also, use linking words like 'because' and 'so' effectively to connect ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: I rarely go to the library because it's quite far from my house. Instead, I prefer reading ebooks on my phone and laptop because they allow me to access a wide range of books anytime and anywhere.

Gợi ý: Focus on clarity and correct grammar. Avoid unclear phrases like 'quiet morphia'. Use linking words such as 'so' or 'therefore' to connect ideas. Also, keep your answer within 5 sentences and avoid repetition.

Ví dụ: I don't usually read books in the library because reading isn't really my cup of tea. Instead, I use my laptop to review lecture notes and complete assignments. The quiet environment helps me concentrate better, so I can make the most of my study time and prepare well for my classes.

Gợi ý: Improve sentence structure and avoid repetition like 'enjoy enjoy'. Use past tense consistently and linking words such as 'because' and 'so' to make your answer coherent.

Ví dụ: I didn't go to the library much when I was a kid because my family rarely visited them. Instead, I usually bought books from a nearby store and enjoyed reading at home. This was more comfortable because I could relax in my own space and take my time with the books I liked.

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear and well-structured. To improve, try to use more varied vocabulary and linking words like 'however' or 'although' to show contrast and make your answer more natural.

Ví dụ: In my opinion, Chinese kids sometimes visit the library; however, they tend to prefer studying or reading at home. This is mainly because their parents supervise them closely to ensure they stay focused. Moreover, studying at home offers a comfortable environment where they can relax after a long day at school.

× Do in the library.

✓ What do you do in the library?

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a verb, making it a sentence fragment. To form a proper question, it should include the auxiliary verb 'do' and the subject 'you' followed by the main verb 'do'.

× I don't usually spend much time reading books in the library requires reading isn't really my cup of tea.

✓ I don't usually spend much time reading books in the library because reading isn't really my cup of tea.

The original sentence incorrectly combines two clauses without proper conjunction or punctuation, resulting in a run-on sentence. Adding 'because' clarifies the reason and corrects the sentence structure.

× the quiet morphia helps me concentrate better.

✓ the quiet atmosphere helps me concentrate better.

The word 'morphia' is incorrect in this context. The intended word is likely 'atmosphere', which correctly describes the environment that helps concentration.

× Except whenever I want to read a book, I usually bought one from a nearby store and enjoy enjoy reading it at home.

✓ Except whenever I wanted to read a book, I usually bought one from a nearby store and enjoyed reading it at home.

The sentence mixes present tense 'want' and 'enjoy' with past tense 'bought'. To maintain past tense consistency, 'want' should be 'wanted' and 'enjoy' should be 'enjoyed'. Also, the repeated word 'enjoy' is a typographical error.