Library— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and provide specific details about why you like the library area.

Ví dụ: Yes, I go to the library almost every day because I am a master's student at the University of Toronto. I need a quiet place to focus on my research and write papers. Additionally, I enjoy the peaceful atmosphere and the comfortable study areas there.

Gợi ý: Your answer has some grammar issues and lacks coherence. Use present tense consistently and linking words to connect ideas. Be more specific about the tasks you do during individual and group work.

Ví dụ: In the library, I usually do individual work such as writing research papers and essays. I also participate in group work, where we collaborate on presentations by brainstorming ideas before starting the project.

Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable but contains tense inconsistencies and awkward phrasing. Use past tense consistently and avoid redundancy. Provide clearer reasons why you enjoyed the library as a child.

Ví dụ: Yes, when I was a kid, I often went to the library with my parents because they enjoyed the quiet and learning environment. It helped me feel calm, and I loved reading my favourite animation books there.

Gợi ý: Your answer has grammar mistakes and unclear expressions. Use correct grammar and clearer vocabulary. Explain reasons more logically and use linking words to improve coherence.

Ví dụ: Generally, Chinese parents do not often take their young children to the library because they believe the kids might be too noisy or unable to concentrate, which could disturb others. Therefore, they usually prefer to take their children to playgrounds instead.

× Yes, I went to the library almost every day because currently I'm a masters student at U of D University of Toronto and I have to study there every day.

✓ Yes, I go to the library almost every day because currently I'm a master's student at U of D University of Toronto and I have to study there every day.

The sentence mixes past tense 'went' with present context 'currently' and 'have to study'. The correct tense here is present simple 'go' to match the ongoing action. Also, 'masters' should be 'master's' to indicate possession.

× currently I'm a masters student at U of D University of Toronto

✓ currently I'm a master's student at U of D University of Toronto

The word 'masters' should be possessive 'master's' to correctly describe the type of student. This is a common adjective form for academic degrees.

× For my research interests and my paper.

✓ This is for my research interests and my paper.

The original is a sentence fragment lacking a subject and verb. Adding 'This is' completes the sentence structure.

× I have to search and I need the quietest place to study and then I like the area.

✓ I have to search, and I need the quietest place to study, so I like the area.

The original sentence is a run-on with improper conjunctions. Using commas and 'so' clarifies the relationship between ideas.

× Most of the time when I'm in the library, I was doing it either individual work or group work.

✓ Most of the time when I'm in the library, I do either individual work or group work.

The sentence incorrectly uses past tense 'was doing' with present tense 'I'm'. Present simple 'do' fits better to describe habitual actions.

× Individual work most of the time is working on my research paper, my essay.

✓ Individual work most of the time involves working on my research paper or my essay.

The verb 'is working' is awkward here; 'involves working' better expresses the activity. Also, 'or' is more appropriate than a comma between 'research paper' and 'my essay'.

× And then group work is like we were working on the group presentations and then we have to come up ideas together before we start up.

✓ And then group work is like we work on group presentations, and we have to come up with ideas together before we start.

The original mixes past 'were working' with present 'have to'. Present tense 'work' and 'have to' are consistent for habitual actions. Also, 'come up ideas' should be 'come up with ideas'.

× we have to come up ideas together before we start up.

✓ we have to come up with ideas together before we start.

The correct phrase is 'come up with ideas'. Also, 'start up' is unnecessary; 'start' suffices.

× Yes, when I was a kid, I also go to the library with my parents because they really like spending their time in the library with the quiet atmosphere and the learning environment.

✓ Yes, when I was a kid, I also went to the library with my parents because they really liked spending their time in the library with the quiet atmosphere and the learning environment.

The sentence mixes past 'was' and present 'go' and 'like'. All verbs should be in past tense to maintain consistency.

× It also makes me very calm down and I can read my animation books all day long, so that's how I used to do in the library.

✓ It also calms me down a lot, and I can read my animation books all day long, so that's how I used to spend time in the library.

'Makes me very calm down' is incorrect; 'calms me down' is correct. Also, 'used to do' is vague; 'used to spend time' is clearer.

× Most of the time, parents or Chinese kids won't often go to the library because they think their kids are too little.

✓ Most of the time, parents or Chinese kids don't often go to the library because they think their kids are too young.

'Won't often go' is awkward; 'don't often go' is better. Also, 'too little' is incorrect for age; 'too young' is appropriate.

× They might like talks a lot or they might couldn't focus or affect others of learning.

✓ They might talk a lot, or they might not be able to focus or might affect others' learning.

'Might like talks a lot' is incorrect; 'might talk a lot' is correct. 'Might couldn't' is ungrammatical; use 'might not be able to'. 'Affect others of learning' should be 'affect others' learning'.

× So most of the time they will just bring Chinese kids to the playground instead of going to the library.

✓ So most of the time, they will just bring Chinese kids to the playground instead of taking them to the library.

'Bring' is correct but 'going to the library' is inconsistent with 'bring'. Using 'taking them to the library' matches the structure better.