Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you often go to the library?
Thí sinh
Yeah, I often go to the library to read aloud because I'm majoring business English and I have to improve my spoken English. For example, every morning I will go to the library because this time the library have have few people.
Giám khảo
What do you usually do in the library?
Thí sinh
In the morning I will choose to read and in the afternoon or evening I will choose to writing in the library to do my homework and reflect my learning. And I think and the library is.
Giám khảo
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Thí sinh
No, I don't go to the library. Even I was a kid because I grew up in countryside and the infrastructure to read is not good. So I have no choice. I have no opportunity to go to the lab.
Giám khảo
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Thí sinh
Umm, trying this case doesn't always go to the library, because I think we as the development of technology, Chinese kids and the teenagers prefer to read online or or.
Do you often go to the library?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了去图书馆的原因和时间,但语法和表达不够准确,且有重复词汇。建议注意语法时态和单复数形式,避免重复,同时使句子更自然流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, I often go to the library to practice reading aloud because I am majoring in Business English and want to improve my spoken skills. For instance, I usually go in the morning when the library is less crowded.
What do you usually do in the library?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答不完整且语法错误较多,表达不清晰。建议回答时注意句子完整性,使用正确的时态和动词形式,并且避免句子中断。
Ví dụ: In the morning, I usually read books, and in the afternoon or evening, I do my homework and review what I have learned in the library.
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 时态使用不当,表达不够连贯。建议使用过去时描述过去的情况,并且注意词汇准确性,如“library”而非“lab”。
Ví dụ: No, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because I grew up in the countryside where there were not many reading facilities. So, I had no opportunity to visit a library.
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答不完整且表达不清晰,语法错误较多。建议组织完整句子,使用恰当的连接词,并清楚表达观点。
Ví dụ: I think Chinese kids don't always go to the library because with the development of technology, many of them prefer reading online or using digital devices.
× For example, every morning I will go to the library because this time the library have have few people.
✓ For example, every morning I will go to the library because at this time the library has few people.
这里的主语是单数名词“library”,谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式“has”,而不是“have”。另外,句中重复了“have”,应删除多余的一个。
× In the morning I will choose to read and in the afternoon or evening I will choose to writing in the library to do my homework and reflect my learning.
✓ In the morning I will choose to read and in the afternoon or evening I will choose to write in the library to do my homework and reflect on my learning.
动词“choose to”后应接动词原形,因此“writing”应改为“write”。另外,“reflect my learning”应改为“reflect on my learning”,因为“reflect”后面通常接介词“on”。
× And I think and the library is.
✓ And I think the library is quiet.
该句结构不完整,缺少谓语和宾语,导致句意不明。应补充完整句子,使其表达完整的意思。
× No, I don't go to the library. Even I was a kid because I grew up in countryside and the infrastructure to read is not good.
✓ No, I didn't go to the library even when I was a kid because I grew up in the countryside and the infrastructure for reading was not good.
描述过去的动作应使用过去时态,“don't go”应改为“didn't go”。“Even I was a kid”应改为“even when I was a kid”以表达时间状语。
× So I have no choice. I have no opportunity to go to the lab.
✓ So I had no choice. I had no opportunity to go to the library.
“lab”应为“library”,且描述过去情况应使用过去时态“had”。
× Umm, trying this case doesn't always go to the library, because I think we as the development of technology, Chinese kids and the teenagers prefer to read online or or.
✓ Umm, in this case, kids don't always go to the library, because I think with the development of technology, Chinese kids and teenagers prefer to read online or other ways.
“trying this case”表达不正确,应为“in this case”。“kids”应使用复数形式。句中“or or”重复,应删除多余部分。