Library— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt chưa chính xác, ví dụ như "technology development" nên là "technological development" hoặc "advancement in technology". Bạn cũng nên tránh lặp từ như "information" nhiều lần và câu trả lời hơi dài, nên cô đọng hơn. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn.

Ví dụ: No, I don't often go to the library because technological advancements allow me to find information quickly and conveniently online. Therefore, I usually research on the Internet, which lets me access materials anytime and anywhere.

Gợi ý: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, ví dụ "it has me focus my study facility" không đúng, có thể nói "it helps me focus on my studies". Ngoài ra, câu cuối bị lặp từ và không rõ nghĩa "I need to celebrate to". Hãy sử dụng các liên từ như "because" hoặc "since" để câu rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp.

Ví dụ: When I go to the library, I usually study because it is very peaceful and helps me focus. In addition, I read books there since some are not available on the Internet.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu không rõ ràng, ví dụ "instead of went to library" nên là "instead of going to the library". Bạn nên chia động từ đúng và sắp xếp câu hợp lý hơn. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời hơi dài và lặp lại ý, nên cô đọng và dùng liên từ để mạch lạc.

Ví dụ: When I was a kid, I didn't often go to the library because I preferred playing sports. Playing sports helped me relax and stay fit.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ không chính xác, ví dụ "Chinese kids are don't go" nên là "Chinese kids don't often go". "a technology develop" nên là "technological development". Bạn nên tránh dùng từ thừa như "uh" và dùng liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn.

Ví dụ: Currently, I think Chinese kids don't often go to the library because technological development allows them to research information on the Internet instead.

× Oh no, I don't often go to the library because, you know, technology development.

✓ Oh no, I don't often go to the library because, you know, technology is developing.

The phrase 'technology development' is a noun phrase, but here a verb in the present participle form 'developing' is needed to indicate the ongoing action causing the reason for not going to the library.

× It's very convenient to me very fast, and I can read information anywhere at any time.

✓ It's very convenient for me, very fast, and I can read information anywhere at any time.

The correct preposition to express convenience for someone is 'for', not 'to'. 'Convenient for me' is the proper phrase.

× So I don't often go to the library in school.

✓ So I don't often go to the library at school.

The correct preposition to indicate location in this context is 'at' rather than 'in' when referring to a place like school.

× When I get to the library I usually study because it's very peaceful and it has me focus my study facility.

✓ When I get to the library I usually study because it's very peaceful and it helps me focus on my studies.

The phrase 'it has me focus my study facility' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'it helps me focus on my studies'. Also, 'study facility' is not appropriate here.

× In addition, I also read books in library because some book some book I don't have in Internet so I need to celebrate to.

✓ In addition, I also read books in the library because some books I don't have on the Internet so I need to go there.

The phrase 'in library' needs the definite article 'the'. 'Some book some book' is repetitive and should be 'some books'. The preposition 'in Internet' should be 'on the Internet'. 'I need to celebrate to' is incorrect and should be 'I need to go there' or similar.

× When I was a kid I didn't go to the library because you know when I was a kid I usually like to play sport instead of went to library to read book because when I play sports it help me relax and it can and stay fit I.

✓ When I was a kid I didn't go to the library because, you know, I usually liked to play sports instead of going to the library to read books because when I played sports it helped me relax and stay fit.

The verb tense should be past tense to match 'when I was a kid'. 'Like' should be 'liked', 'went' should be 'going', 'play sports' should be 'played sports', 'help' should be 'helped'. Also, 'read book' should be 'read books'. The phrase 'it can and stay fit I' is incorrect and corrected to 'stay fit'.

× Uh, right now I think, uh, Chinese kids are don't go to the library often because, you know, a technology develop.

✓ Uh, right now I think, uh, Chinese kids don't often go to the library because, you know, technology is developing.

The phrase 'are don't go' is incorrect; it should be 'don't go'. 'A technology develop' is incorrect; it should be 'technology is developing'.

× So people usually tend to refer to research information in the Internet instead of go to the library.

✓ So people usually tend to research information on the Internet instead of going to the library.

The phrase 'refer to research information' is awkward; 'research information' is better. The preposition 'in the Internet' should be 'on the Internet'. 'Instead of go' should be 'instead of going'.