List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Ответ должен быть более структурированным и лаконичным. Используйте связующие слова для плавного перехода между идеями и избегайте повторений. Например, начните с общего утверждения, затем объясните причину и завершите примером.

Ví dụ: I usually don't make a shopping list when I go out. However, when my mother asks me to buy groceries, I write down everything she says to avoid confusion and unnecessary calls.

Gợi ý: Ответ неясен и содержит грамматические ошибки. Следует четко выразить мысль, использовать связующие слова и избегать разрывов в предложениях. Также стоит объяснить, почему список не работает.

Ví dụ: I have tried making a list for my work, but it doesn't help because I often forget to write down all tasks correctly. Therefore, I prefer to rely on my memory.

Gợi ý: Ответ слишком длинный и содержит повторения. Следует использовать связующие слова для логичности и структурировать ответ: сначала причина, затем мнение и пример.

Ví dụ: Some people dislike making lists because they trust their memory. I think it's a personal choice, as some may worry about losing the list or prefer to remember tasks mentally.

Gợi ý: Ответ содержит много повторений и нечетких выражений. Следует использовать связующие слова, избегать лишних деталей и завершать мысль четко.

Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on my phone because I can access them anytime, especially when shopping spontaneously. Also, I avoid losing paper lists, which can be stressful.

× Usually when I go out for shopping I don't make list but when my mother is sending me to buy something, especially groceries, I usually have to write down everything she says so I won't be confused and I won't be calling her every whenever I'm like I have to buy something.

✓ Usually when I go out shopping I don't make a list but when my mother is sending me to buy something, especially groceries, I usually have to write down everything she says so I won't be confused and I won't be calling her every time I'm like I have to buy something.

The phrase 'make list' is missing the definite article 'a' before 'list'. In English, singular countable nouns generally require an article. Also, 'go out for shopping' should be 'go out shopping' as 'shopping' here functions as an activity without 'for'. Additionally, 'every whenever' is incorrect; it should be 'every time'. These corrections improve grammatical accuracy and naturalness.

× I've tried to make a list for my work but it didn't work because I really get confused and I'm not sure if I write down everything right so I have to. Take that myself.

✓ I've tried to make a list for my work but it didn't work because I really got confused and I'm not sure if I wrote down everything right so I have to take care of that myself.

The verb 'get' should be in past tense 'got' to match the past context. Similarly, 'write' should be 'wrote' to maintain past tense consistency. Also, 'Take that myself' is incomplete and unclear; it should be 'take care of that myself' to convey the intended meaning. These changes ensure tense consistency and clarity.

× Because usually people rely on their memory and brain an we shouldn't be blaming them because it's really great if someone can easily remember everything from their memory and.

✓ Because usually people rely on their memory and brain, and we shouldn't be blaming them because it's really great if someone can easily remember everything from their memory.

The conjunction 'an' is a typo and should be 'and'. Also, the sentence ends abruptly with 'and.' which is incomplete. Removing the trailing 'and.' completes the sentence properly. Proper conjunction use and sentence completion are necessary for clarity.

× I think it's their choice if they don't want to make this because they maybe, maybe they're thinking that they can lose this list. Of tasks or.

✓ I think it's their choice if they don't want to make this list because maybe they're thinking that they can lose this list of tasks or something.

The pronoun 'this' is vague without a noun; adding 'list' clarifies the meaning. The phrase 'maybe, maybe they're thinking' is redundant; simplifying to 'maybe they're thinking' improves fluency. The sentence ends abruptly with 'or.' which is incomplete; adding 'something' completes the thought. These corrections improve clarity and coherence.

× I usually prefer making list on my phone because I can easily access to it whenever I'm spontaneously going on shopping mix, for example.

✓ I usually prefer making a list on my phone because I can easily access it whenever I'm spontaneously going shopping, for example.

The phrase 'making list' needs the article 'a' before 'list'. The preposition 'access to' is incorrect; 'access' is a transitive verb and does not require 'to'. The phrase 'going on shopping mix' is incorrect; it should be 'going shopping'. These corrections fix article usage, preposition misuse, and awkward phrasing.

× So it's really easy for me to rely on my phone neither than on the paper because I know myself, I can lose that piece of paper and I'm going to be stressed in order because what am I gonna do after losing this paper?

✓ So it's really easy for me to rely on my phone rather than on paper because I know myself, I can lose that piece of paper and I'm going to be stressed out because what am I gonna do after losing this paper?

The phrase 'neither than' is incorrect; the correct comparative conjunction is 'rather than'. 'On the paper' should be 'on paper' as a general reference. 'Stressed in order' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'stressed out'. These corrections improve the use of conjunctions, prepositions, and idiomatic expressions.