List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, use correct grammar, and avoid redundancy. For example, say "Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember what to buy and saves time."

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a shopping list before I go to the store because it helps me remember everything I need and prevents me from buying unnecessary items.

Gợi ý: Your answer is confusing and lacks coherence. Use clear sentences and linking words to explain how making lists helps you organize your work. For example, "Yes, I make lists for my work because they help me prioritize tasks and know what to do next."

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make lists for my work because they help me organize my tasks clearly and decide what to do next.

Gợi ý: Your answer has good ideas but needs clearer expression and linking words. Try to explain that some people dislike lists because they prefer freedom and flexibility. For example, "Some people don't like making lists because they feel it restricts their freedom to choose what to do."

Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to have the freedom to decide what to do at any moment, without being restricted by a plan.

Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable but could be clearer and more concise. Use linking words to explain your preference. For example, "I prefer making lists on paper because I can stick them in visible places, which helps me remember tasks better than using my phone."

Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on paper because I can stick them on my wall or desk, so I see them easily. Using my phone is less effective since I might forget to check it.

× If I haven't took make a list I will not find my what I want to buy.

✓ If I haven't taken a list, I will not find what I want to buy.

The verb 'took' is the simple past tense, but after 'haven't' (have not), the past participle form 'taken' should be used to form the present perfect tense correctly.

× Yes, I always make her lay still and I went shopping.

✓ Yes, I always make a list before I go shopping.

The original sentence is unclear and contains incorrect words ('make her lay still'). The intended meaning is likely about making a list before shopping, so the sentence is restructured for clarity and correctness.

× And then I had to make a list that can make me. Very clear.

✓ And then I had to make a list that can make things very clear to me.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'things' and 'to me' clarifies the meaning, and combining the sentence improves flow.

× Yes, I always make her Lester for my work.

✓ Yes, I always make a list for my work.

The phrase 'make her Lester' is incorrect and likely a mishearing or typo. The correct phrase is 'make a list'.

× When I was studying here, I will. Michael Easter, because that can, clearly.

✓ When I was studying here, I would make a list because that can help me clearly.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Will' is incorrectly used; 'would' fits better for past habitual action. 'Michael Easter' seems to be a mishearing of 'make a list'. The sentence is restructured for clarity.

× Uh, I find that. What should I do next?

✓ Uh, I find that it helps me know what I should do next.

The original sentence is fragmented. Adding 'it helps me know' connects the ideas properly.

× Some people like freedom, so they want to make a list to to stop them what they want to do.

✓ Some people like freedom, so they don't want to make a list to stop them from doing what they want to do.

The original sentence misuses pronouns and prepositions. 'To to stop them what they want to do' is incorrect; it should be 'to stop them from doing what they want to do'.

× I think there's a good way to relax myself.

✓ I think it's a good way to relax myself.

'There's' (there is) is incorrect here; 'it's' (it is) correctly refers to the method being a good way to relax.

× Because it's a very free choice.

✓ Because it's a very free choice.

This sentence is correct and needs no correction.

× I'd like to make a list on paper because I think a paper can stick anywhere and then I will locate on the wall on my table out the other size and then if I make some blister on my phone I can't say it and I don't know what should I do next.

✓ I'd like to make a list on paper because I think paper can stick anywhere, so I can place it on the wall or on my table. If I make a list on my phone, I can't see it and I don't know what I should do next.

The original sentence has multiple errors including incorrect quantifiers ('a paper' should be 'paper'), unclear phrasing ('locate on the wall on my table out the other size'), and misuse of words ('blister' instead of 'list'). The sentence is corrected for clarity and proper word usage.