List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally clear but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, such as "Sanford the important stuff" and "when I shot". Try to use simpler, correct sentences and avoid redundancy. Also, keep your answer within 5 sentences and use linking words to improve coherence.

Ví dụ: Yes, I prefer to make a list when I shop because it helps me remember exactly what I need. Otherwise, I often forget important items and end up buying unnecessary things. Therefore, I always keep a list with me to stay organized and save time.

Gợi ý: Your answer has good content but is somewhat confusing due to grammar mistakes and unclear phrases like "an I make a list" and "steps which are not a prior." Try to organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, using linking words such as "because" or "otherwise" to improve flow.

Ví dụ: Yes, I always try to make a list of my daily work tasks because it helps me stay focused. When I start my day, I write down what I need to do with a pen and paper. Otherwise, I might forget important tasks or spend time on less important ones.

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question but contains grammatical errors and unclear expressions like "to to focus" and "some extra works to keep their next day little free." Try to use clearer, simpler sentences and provide specific reasons with linking words to improve coherence.

Ví dụ: Some people dislike making lists because they feel it limits their flexibility. They think lists force them to focus only on certain tasks, leaving no room for unexpected work or free time the next day.

Gợi ý: Your answer explains your preference well but has some grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing like "on my pay on a paper" and repeated use of "'cause." Try to use more formal linking words such as "because" and keep sentences concise and clear.

Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on paper rather than on my phone because I try to avoid using my phone at work. When I use my phone, I often get distracted by social media, which wastes my time.

× Yes, I do prefer to make a list when I shop so that I remember properly what I need to buy.

✓ Yes, I prefer to make a list when I shop so that I properly remember what I need to buy.

The phrase 'do prefer to make' is grammatically correct but unnecessarily uses the auxiliary 'do' for emphasis. Removing 'do' makes the sentence more natural. Also, 'remember properly' is better as 'properly remember' to place the adverb correctly before the verb.

× Otherwise I do forget things pretty quickly and when I don't have an exact list, I tend to buy unnecessary stuff Sanford the important stuff that I should have bought.

✓ Otherwise, I do forget things pretty quickly and when I don't have an exact list, I tend to buy unnecessary stuff and miss the important stuff that I should have bought.

The word 'Sanford' is incorrect here; it seems to be a typo for 'and miss'. The preposition 'and miss' correctly connects the two ideas. Also, a comma after 'Otherwise' improves clarity.

× So I always try to keep a list with me when I shot.

✓ So I always try to keep a list with me when I shop.

The word 'shot' is a typo and should be 'shop' to match the context of shopping. This is a spelling error affecting meaning.

× Honestly, I do always try to make a list of my work on My usual everyday goal is when I start my work I usually have my pen and paper and an I make a list of what I'm doing on that day 'cause it helps me to keep myself on track.

✓ Honestly, I always try to make a list of my work. My usual everyday goal is that when I start my work, I usually have my pen and paper and I make a list of what I'm doing that day because it helps me keep myself on track.

The sentence is run-on and contains pronoun and article errors. 'do always' is better as 'always'. 'on My' should be split into two sentences. 'an I' is incorrect; it should be 'and I'. Also, 'on that day' is better as 'that day'. The conjunction 'cause' is informal; 'because' is preferred in formal speech.

× Otherwise I keep forgetting things or spend time in the steps which are not a prior.

✓ Otherwise, I keep forgetting things or spend time on steps which are not a priority.

The phrase 'spend time in the steps' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'on'. Also, 'a prior' is a misspelling of 'a priority'. Adding a comma after 'Otherwise' improves readability.

× I know some people who don't like to make lists. It's because they think that making a list keeps them focused only on certain task and they don't have the option to to focus on something different or two to like have plans for some extra works to keep their next day little free.

✓ I know some people who don't like to make lists. It's because they think that making a list keeps them focused only on certain tasks and they don't have the option to focus on something different or to have plans for some extra work to keep their next day a little free.

The word 'task' should be plural 'tasks' to match 'certain'. The phrase 'to to focus' has a repeated 'to' which is incorrect. 'two to like have' is incorrect; it should be 'to have'. 'extra works' should be 'extra work' as 'work' is uncountable here. 'little free' should be 'a little free' to be grammatically correct.

× I prefer to make a list on my pay on a paper rather than on my phone 'cause I tried to avoid my phone when I'm at work 'cause if I am making a list on my phone and I'm keeping track by myself from my phone, then I often spend time scrolling social media and that's a big waste of my time so I prefer.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper rather than on my phone because I try to avoid my phone when I'm at work. If I make a list on my phone and keep track from it, I often spend time scrolling social media and that's a big waste of my time, so I prefer paper.

The phrase 'on my pay on a paper' is incorrect; it should be 'on paper'. 'Tried' should be 'try' to match present tense. The sentence is long and run-on; splitting into shorter sentences improves clarity. 'Keeping track by myself from my phone' is awkward; 'keep track from it' is clearer. Replacing informal ''cause' with 'because' is better for formal speech.