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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you make a list when you shop?

Thí sinh

Yes, I always make a list of what I want to buy before I go shopping. So that I won't forget them.

Giám khảo

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Thí sinh

I don't make a list for my work because I want to stay flexible of what I want to do. Making a list may. Not help me. Stay focused on the thing I am doing.

Giám khảo

Why don't some people like making lists?

Thí sinh

People who don't make this may want to stay flexible. For example, when something unexpected happens. A fixed list Do nothing to help people, to adjust their priorities.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Thí sinh

I prefer to make a list on my phone. It is easier. To revise your plans. If your list is on the phone, besides, you can. Look at it whenever you want. Because phones are easily.

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Part 1

Do you make a list when you shop?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 回答较为简短且有语法错误,如“so that I won't forget them”应与前句合并,避免句子碎片。建议回答时注意句子完整性,并适当丰富内容。

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a list of the items I want to buy before going shopping because it helps me remember everything and saves time.

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和断句不连贯,如“Making a list may. Not help me.”应为完整句子。建议注意句子结构,避免断句,表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: I don't usually make a list for my work because I prefer to stay flexible and adjust my tasks as needed, which helps me focus better.

Why don't some people like making lists?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清,如“People who don't make this”应为“People who don't make lists”,且句子断裂。建议使用完整句子并清晰表达观点。

Ví dụ: Some people dislike making lists because they want to remain flexible, especially when unexpected events occur, and a fixed list might prevent them from adjusting their priorities.

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: 回答中句子断裂严重,表达不连贯,且最后一句不完整。建议练习连贯表达,使用连接词,使答案更自然流畅。

Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's easier to revise plans and I can check the list anytime since I always have my phone with me.

Ngữ pháp

Sentence structure errors

× So that I won't forget them.

So that I won't forget it.

这里的代词应与前文的单数名词list保持一致,使用it而不是them。

Sentence structure errors

× Making a list may. Not help me. Stay focused on the thing I am doing.

Making a list may not help me stay focused on the thing I am doing.

原句断句错误,导致句子不完整,应将句子合并成完整的陈述句。

Sentence structure errors

× People who don't make this may want to stay flexible.

People who don't make lists may want to stay flexible.

此处指代不明确,'this'应改为复数名词'lists',与上下文保持一致。

Sentence structure errors

× A fixed list Do nothing to help people, to adjust their priorities.

A fixed list does nothing to help people adjust their priorities.

主谓不一致,'Do'应改为第三人称单数形式'does',且句子结构需调整使其通顺。

Sentence structure errors

× It is easier. To revise your plans.

It is easier to revise your plans.

句子不完整,断句错误,应合并为完整句子。

Sentence structure errors

× If your list is on the phone, besides, you can. Look at it whenever you want.

If your list is on the phone, besides, you can look at it whenever you want.

断句错误,导致句子不完整,应合并为完整句子。

Sentence structure errors

× Because phones are easily.

Because phones are easy to carry.

句子不完整且用词错误,'easily'为副词,需改为形容词'easy'并补充完整表达。

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