List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors. Try to form complete sentences and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and be more specific about why you make a list.

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember everything I need. For example, I list daily essentials so I don't forget anything when I visit the grocery store or mall.

Gợi ý: Your answer has good content but is affected by grammar mistakes and unclear phrasing. Use correct verb forms and clearer expressions. Also, explain briefly how making lists helps your work.

Ví dụ: Yes, I make lists for my work because they help me remember important tasks. I usually write them on paper before starting, and this method helps me stay organized and complete my work efficiently.

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains several errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid confusing phrases. Use linking words to connect reasons logically and be specific about why some people avoid lists.

Ví dụ: I think some people avoid making lists because they find it time-consuming and complicated. Also, they might feel pressured to follow the list strictly, which can be stressful for them.

Gợi ý: Your answer has good ideas but is affected by unclear wording and grammar mistakes. Use correct expressions and avoid redundancy. Explain clearly why you prefer your phone and how it benefits you.

Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is convenient and always accessible. Whenever I need to check my list, I can quickly open the notes app, which helps me remember my tasks easily.

× I make a list when I usually go for shopping because I.

✓ I make a list when I usually go shopping because I.

The phrase 'go for shopping' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'go shopping'. The verb 'go' is followed by the gerund form 'shopping' without the preposition 'for'.

× That's why I make a full list of word thing I need for my day-to-day lives so I know whenever I go to the shopping mall and grocery store, I always have a list with me.

✓ That's why I make a full list of the things I need for my day-to-day life so I know whenever I go to the shopping mall and grocery store, I always have a list with me.

The phrase 'word thing' is incorrect; it should be 'the things'. Also, 'day-to-day lives' should be singular 'day-to-day life' to match the singular subject. Using correct quantifiers and singular/plural forms improves clarity.

× Indeed, I've make a list for my work becauses it is very important for me to recognize some important things that I need to have to consider while working.

✓ Indeed, I've made a list for my work because it is very important for me to recognize some important things that I need to consider while working.

The present perfect form 'I've make' is incorrect; it should be 'I've made' (past participle). Also, 'becauses' is a misspelling of 'because'. The phrase 'need to have to consider' is redundant; 'need to consider' is sufficient.

× So I always write it, write it down on a paper before my works and it is really well and work.

✓ So I always write it down on paper before my work, and it works really well.

The phrase 'write it, write it down' is repetitive; 'write it down' suffices. 'On a paper' should be 'on paper' (uncountable). 'My works' should be 'my work' (uncountable). 'It is really well and work' is incorrect; 'it works really well' is correct.

× In my opinion, some people don't like making list becaused they find it time consuming and complicated.

✓ In my opinion, some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming and complicated.

The word 'becaused' is a misspelling of 'because'. 'Making list' should be 'making lists' (plural). 'Time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming' when used as an adjective.

× Additionally, those who tend to broadcasting it may avoid making less becaused.

✓ Additionally, those who tend to broadcast it may avoid making lists because

The phrase 'tend to broadcasting' is incorrect; it should be 'tend to broadcast' (base verb after 'tend to'). 'Making less' should be 'making lists'. The sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly.

× The don't want to feel pressured and to stay organized.

✓ They don't want to feel pressured and want to stay organized.

'The' is incorrect; it should be 'They'. Also, parallel structure requires 'want to stay organized' to match 'want to feel pressured'.

× No G technology plays a vital role so I prefer making a list on my phone bill cause.

✓ No, technology plays a vital role, so I prefer making a list on my phone because

The phrase 'No G technology' is unclear; likely intended 'No, technology'. 'Phone bill cause' is incorrect; should be 'phone because'. The sentence is incomplete and lacks proper punctuation.

× It is easily assessable to me and whenever I need to take a look for my list, I can easily open my notes from my electronic device and I can use it.

✓ It is easily accessible to me, and whenever I need to look at my list, I can easily open my notes on my electronic device and use it.

'Assessable' is incorrect; the correct word is 'accessible'. The phrase 'take a look for' should be 'look at'. 'From my electronic device' is better as 'on my electronic device'.

× As a result, I have always remember what you do.

✓ As a result, I always remember what I need to do.

The phrase 'I have always remember' is incorrect; it should be 'I always remember' or 'I have always remembered'. Also, 'what you do' should be 'what I need to do' to maintain subject consistency.