List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to make your answer more structured and clear. Start with a direct response, then add supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases like "use my brain while surfing."

Ví dụ: No, I usually don't make a list when I go shopping because I prefer to buy things spontaneously. However, I try to remember what I need so I don't forget important items.

Gợi ý: Improve sentence fluency by combining short sentences and using linking words. Also, correct grammar mistakes and avoid repetition.

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized. When I follow my list, I can complete all my tasks efficiently; otherwise, things become chaotic.

Gợi ý: Focus on clear grammar and sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific reasons or examples more smoothly.

Ví dụ: Some people dislike making lists because they find it difficult to follow them. For example, my sister struggles to organize her work with lists, which shows that it depends on individual personality.

Gợi ý: Clarify your ideas and avoid incomplete sentences. Use linking words to explain your preference clearly and avoid vague phrases like "the iPhone is more."

Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on paper because I can see it easily when I enter my room. Using a phone is less effective for me since I might forget to check it regularly.

× Well, actually when I got when I go shopping, I just tend to buy anything.

✓ Well, actually when I go shopping, I just tend to buy anything.

The phrase 'when I got when I go shopping' is incorrect because 'got' is past tense and unnecessary here. The correct form is 'when I go shopping' to match the present tense context.

× Seems on my mind at the time so I don't really do a list or like write a list.

✓ It seems on my mind at the time so I don't really make a list or write a list.

The sentence lacks a subject 'It' before 'seems' and uses 'do a list' which is incorrect; the correct verb is 'make a list'. Also, 'like write a list' is better as 'or write a list' for clarity.

× But I do use my brain while surfing so yeah.

✓ But I do use my brain while shopping, so yeah.

The word 'surfing' is incorrect in this context; the intended activity is 'shopping'. 'Surfing' refers to internet or water activity, so it should be replaced with 'shopping'.

× Usually when I do have a list for working.

✓ Usually, when I have a list for work,

The phrase 'for working' is awkward; 'for work' is the correct expression. Also, the sentence is incomplete and should be connected properly.

× But when I don't, everything is a chaos so.

✓ But when I don't, everything is chaos, so

The phrase 'a chaos' is incorrect because 'chaos' is an uncountable noun and does not take an article. Also, the sentence ends abruptly and should be connected to the next idea.

× Some people find it hard to have a list or to follow the less.

✓ Some people find it hard to have a list or to follow the list.

The word 'less' is incorrect here; it should be 'list' to match the context of making and following lists.

× So I have example like my own sister, she find it very hard to do a list.

✓ So I have an example like my own sister, she finds it very hard to do a list.

The verb 'find' should be 'finds' to agree with the singular subject 'she'. Also, 'example' needs the article 'an' before it.

× Or like an organized paper or organized her work.

✓ Or like an organized paper or organizing her work.

The phrase 'organized her work' is incorrect here; it should be 'organizing her work' to maintain parallel structure with 'an organized paper'.

× Using a digital device to duelist seems hard to stick.

✓ Using a digital device to do a list seems hard to stick to.

The phrase 'to duelist' is incorrect; it should be 'to do a list'. Also, 'hard to stick' should be 'hard to stick to' to correctly use the phrasal verb.

× With the list, so I prefer so I prefer using paper.

✓ With the list, I prefer using paper.

The sentence is repetitive and contains unnecessary words 'so I prefer so I prefer'. It should be simplified for clarity.

× Because it's like in front of me, I can see it whenever I entered my room, I can see the paper, so it's easier to know what I have.

✓ Because it's right in front of me, I can see it whenever I enter my room; I can see the paper, so it's easier to know what I have.

The phrase 'like in front of me' is informal and unclear; 'right in front of me' is better. Also, 'whenever I entered my room' should be 'whenever I enter my room' to maintain present tense consistency.